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Reviews for Tom Riddle and the Pureblood Prince

By : PensievePerson
  • From missanimegrl on August 26, 2010
    Ah and so the resolve to leave her world has been born! Thanks for answering, Pensieve, I'm quite happy you liked my review! Well, as far as this chapter goes, I think she'd have to go into hiding to avoid death, or at least worse punishment than the Cruciatus Curse. I find it ironic that they tell her that its a 'brotherhood' when in her own son's generation one of the most feared Death Eaters is a woman. I'm looking forward to the coming chapters!
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  • From missanimegrl on July 26, 2010
    I'm quite shocked and on the edge of my seat with this! Honestly I'm waiting for the day she meets with Tobias Snape, and what could make a pureblood girl meet and marry a muggle man. I wonder if he simply had a strange charm about him, before he became abusive. Hm? Anyway, so far your story's good, though very shocking and at times suspenseful and quite like a thriller. I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Dawn on June 01, 2010
    Enjoyed reading it. Am bummed about the lack of eileen/voldemort lemon though!
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  • From ANON - misunderstanding on April 14, 2010
    He sodomized her in Chapter 18?
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  • From ANON - Flo on January 15, 2010
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  • From sjauthor on June 26, 2009
    Hey there Pensieve! Great job as usual. I must say, the moment Eileen felt weird in the trophy room, I thought about your other story, "His Glowing Reputation". And then when he started talking about his memories, I noticed it's a cross-over! I love it!

    Eileen must start to feel more uncomfortable around him now...
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  • From sjauthor on June 02, 2009
    Great job, Pensieve. Thank you for letting me know! I haven't been on here for a while. But I liked your new chapter, especially the interaction between Eileen and Riddle.
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  • From sjauthor on February 26, 2009
    Wow, that was some cover-up! And Dippet not willing to believe that his star-pupil could possibly be involved...:D
    Dumbledore is smart, but it certainly looks like Tom is even smarter! Or at least, careful enough not to give him more than suspicions.
    Looking forward to the interaction between Tom and Eileen.
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  • From sjauthor on August 31, 2008
    I still love this story; the way you describe Riddle, cool and relaxed, even though he's performing the most evil deeds, is so how I can imagine Voldemort to be. He is not even slightly afraid of Dumbledore (although he probably should be), and loves to tease him (smiling). Poor Dumbledore, he so knows what's going on but there is nothing he can do, and Tom just loves that.

    And I liked that Tom was finally kissing Eileen. She must be thrilled, as it is clear she is very much in love with him. It's nice to see her happy and getting what she wants, even though I doubt she'll be happy with it in the long run!

    Well written, Pensieve. Great job!
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  • From BrittGirl on August 28, 2008
    This story is seriously good, you're a fantastic writer and the details you put into this tale keep me intrigued. Please update soon!
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  • From sjauthor on July 22, 2008
    Ohhhh, you're finally updating my favorite story!

    Chapter was a little short, but still good.
    If Slughorn is a Legilimens, won't Riddle be in trouble now? He'd be able to find out from the others that he was involved!
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  • From sjauthor on May 20, 2008
    I whole-heartedly agree with Kanashii, on all accounts. I have also read 'Broken by the Dark Lord', which is an excellent story too! Certainly recommended.

    Looking forward to more updates.
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  • From Kanashii on May 18, 2008
    Hi Again Pensieve:
    I must confess that THIS is my most favorite of your stories thus far, even though it is not finished.
    Why? Because I love the story, the build up and tension of Tom Riddle and what we WISHED we could see as his transformation as a student through Hogwarts. The plot is fast paced and riveting and draws me in completely.

    Granted, I love a little sex with my story, but I am one of those "odd" authors who really values a long and detailed story. One that pulls the reader with it along on a wonderous journey.

    Your other stories are quite good too, the violence, etc. Doesn't bother me at all. I've written much worse in my own fanfics (Both HP and non-HP), but what reeled me in, hook line and sinker to your story was how we view this (in a roundabout way) through Eileen Prince's view. It shows how people were drawn in (even seemingly "innocently") into the inner folds of what would soon become Lord Voldemort's most sadistic and cruel inner sanctum, the Death Eaters. :)

    Tom/young Lord Voldemort is portrayed stunningly real and vivid in your story. I love the way you show us, the readers how his mind works, the genius, the cruelness, the true belief "He is the best, and all others are mere pawns in his plans". I will be checking this story VERY frequently and I hope you are not offended when I say that I think this is truly your finest work of all! :)

    Of course the fact that it is long, and looks as if it will be a fairly long novel when finished pulls me in as well. Er, I am rather a fan of long stories.
    I think you might like "Broken By the Dark Lord", as our portrayals of Voldemort are very similar and realistic. Cruel!
    Keep up the excellent work, and a hearty BRAVA to you!
    Warmly,
    Kanashii
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  • From sjauthor on May 16, 2008
    Ahhh, I see you're updating! Great job, keep it up!
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  • From Kanashii on May 16, 2008
    Wonderful story Pensive!
    There are just not enough true "dark Voldemort" stories out there, and I for one love a story that truly TELLS a story. To many people forget Voldemort is a cruel, amoral and vicious person who cares only for himself. I am only up to chapter 13 but love where you are going with this. It reminded me how much fun I had writing my Voldemort story. :)
    I will leave another review when I have finished the story, and I look forward to more of your "Dark Lord's" stories. Keep up the great work!
    Warmly,
    Kanashii
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