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Reviews for Slaughter

By : Blaqk
  • From PotterEntourage on May 03, 2008
    Wow, Law School, you go girl, and don't apologize, real life always comes first! Great chapter, I thought the hottie was Zabini at first, how delicious would that be? Looking forward to their date, Love that she's taking notes on dating! HA!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on May 03, 2008
    Excellent work! It doesn't by any means read like a first time author. It reflex your advid reading and shows off your writing skills brilliantly. I cannot wait to read more of this work. The plot is good and your ability to pull it off only sets it shining. Keep up the good work and please write the updates ASAP!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on May 03, 2008
    this story is brilliant! i cant wait for more!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 03, 2008
    @Ch. 5 :::blowing kisses to you::: that kiss was HOT..thanks for that...I can't imagine where it will go from here, but I know it can only get more intense. I hope Draco doesn't hurt Michael....oh what would Pansy say about this?
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 03, 2008
    @Ch. 4. Go Hermione for getting a new man! well sorta...this Michael guy sounds HOT and he's a Ravenclaw? perfect! Draco is gonna be so pissed...lol, which sounds like more fun for us : ))) I"m loving that he's obsessed with her but still disgusted by it...of course he would be, he's Draco....can't wait to see what happens next. Off to read Ch. 5!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 03, 2008
    Probably one of the best Draco/Hermione stories in terms of real characterizations from canon and the anger/hatred that Draco really has for Hermione that I've read yet. That's quite a compliment because I read a lot of Draco/Hermione. I LOVE how you've managed to write them to the T and STILL create sexual tension. And dammit, your sexual tension and UST is so FREAKING HOT. I really love the way you write Draco...this is definitely going into my favorites...you rock so much : ) ::::handing you a home made strawberry shortcake::::
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  • From ANON - Meeeo on March 30, 2008

    I agree ;D this reminds me so much of Water! I am really hooked on this *____* mean Draco is like, one of the best things in the world =P


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  • From titfortat on March 29, 2008
    Great start. I think so far you have kept Draco and Hermione in charater really well. The start reminds me a lot of a story called Water. (btw if you have not read it I sugeggest you do) But really well done so far
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  • From ANON - purple dragon on March 28, 2008
    I love this story so far!I can't wait to see where it goes.I like the mean Draco.
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  • From jenamalone on March 28, 2008
    are you a malaysian?by the way,this is getting good,u have to continue
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  • From jossie on March 28, 2008
    {"Draco found himself imagining walking up to her as she was babbling on at him about something and slapping her across the face to shut her up. Granger falling in a heap at the floor by his feet from the force of his slap, where she belonged. On the floor; no make that in the dirt, with all the other dirty bloods. His palm marking that ivory skin, bleached from hours in the library, crimson.

    granger stumbling to stand up, grabbing onto his arms to help her stand, him pushing her back down to the floor with a sadistic grin. Granger whimpering, realising her place, a fat tear rolling down her face over the crimson spot where he had marked her. Granger defeated, admitting to him that he was superior to her in every way.

    Granger
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  • From jossie on March 28, 2008
    do you know why i like this story so much,because draco is a badass,not a lovey dovey nice guy.
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  • From kitryder on March 28, 2008
    I want Male Dom! u gotta let Draco put hermione in her place (underneathe him ;-),so tell me babe,when ecxactly draco going to devour that know it all witch alive?
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  • From ANON - PotterEntourage on March 28, 2008
    Honey, that chapter wa soooo Malfoy! It was perfect! Loved the imagery of the copper tinged sweat, just genius! Looking forward to more!
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  • From kazfeist on March 26, 2008
    Well, I think the only solution Hermione has is to make sure Draco doesn't want to bring Pansy there. A well-placed hex in his bed would do the trick, I should think. :D
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