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Reviews for fluffy lovin'

By : bsikes
  • From bananasforyou on March 20, 2008
    omg more please!!
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  • From on March 20, 2008
    Sorry...but no. It was way too confusing to finish reading it. You're story flow needs allot of work.
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  • From brokenvixen on March 19, 2008
    your story is interesting but it needs alot of work. you need to learn how to pace your story and a much better explanation is neede, i got confused on what was happening. get a beta, someone who'll help you organize your story and correct errors on spelling and grammar. if you post again, im sure il enjoy it. you've got a good idea about a story all you need is a better way of writing it.
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