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By : HarryGinny4eva

From Trelweny on August 05, 2012
Wonderful, wonderful story. So much thought and depth involved that sometimes it was overwhelming. But then again... that IS a potential in Draco/Hermione pairings that is more pull than detainment.

I honestly thought it was Narcissa all along who obliviated Draco's darker memories from 7th year. It made more sense than had it been Lucius, particularly in the How of it and the thought all together. I think it would have been a whole lot more difficult to try and give explanations that would be believable had Lucius in fact been the one.

Loved the Malfoy engagement ring. What Really impressed me was the charms each woman who had accepted the ring added to it. Thank goodness no one charmed it for Pureblood! But then again... those in the past who might have been sticklers for such a thing probably never considered the possibility of anyone Not pureblood Getting the ring so why would they think to add such a charm?

Thanks so much for writing.
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From flamingmoth on October 19, 2009
This is an awesome story -- charming, funny and well-written. Even though there's some angst and drama in the earlier chapters between Ron and Draco (I haven't got past chapter 18 yet) it's still got a really light-hearted tone. Nice!
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From saffron on November 10, 2008
you have no idea how much I love this story. this story got me through me not being able to write because of the car crash I was in. Great story.

Just to let you know new chapter for DR/HR story forsake all others

http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600017451&chapter=8

Thank you for all your wonderful comments.
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From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2008
I feel like we're playing review tag. LOL Wow, no kidding you just left Sydney? How's that for a small world? I have family down there but I live further north in the Sunshine state. :) I'm glad you enjoyed your time there but yes, it's better to be closer to family and friends, I would have chosen to do the same.

Squeeeeeee that you're almost ready to post a whole new story. You're doing it the right way too, I really should write out a heap and then post, not go by the skin of my teeth. The first one I ever wrote here was pre-written, can't say the same for anything since. LOL I will definitely be bombarding you, of course, just not in a big heap like here because with the new one I will be waiting for updates along with everyone else.

Now while I'm pleased you enjoyed the Office Party story, (and Merlin don't I wish my office was more like that too although they are fun to have a few drinks with) I got far more enjoyment out of knowing I cheered you up when you were having a crappy Monday (Monday's are rather like that, aren't they?) I'll take a virtual huggle (never say no to those. LOL) And I'll forgive you for making me cry this time but.............. LOL Look forward to the new story. :)
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From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2008
What do I say here? There are many stories on this site that I love and writers whose stories I simply cannot get enough of. But with your story...I laughed, I cried, I held on with bated breath, I got angry, I shook my fist, I all but buried my desk in tissues (and if you knew me, you'd know how much I hate to cry), I was surprised at what I got wrong and sometimes I was so right about something I practically patted myself on the back. (lol) I sighed at the tender moments and shook my head at some of the reactions (I too have in-laws who tried to take over my wedding) and was amazed at how much I 'got' certain parts of your story. In all, this was fantastic and I resented anyone or anything that got in the way of my reading this from start to finish. (Damn real life getting in the way). At least now I can stop bombarding you with my reviews although it wouldn't look so bad had I discovered your story earlier (but then I wouldn't have got to read it all in the one hit). I LOVED this story, I LOVE the way you write and I look forward to anything else you might write in the future (the very near future, I hope). Thank you very much for sharing this story. Now I need to get rid of the tissues, buy more chocolate and pretend I care about the real world again. LOL
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From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2008
I can't believe you had me crying again. I could deal with Ron and Hermione's talk but when Draco went to confront his father...........OMG!!!!! You did have me wondering in an early chapter if Lucius really was blocking Draco for the reasons Draco thought he was and it was confirmed the moment I read Lucius telling him that he was not the one who worked the memory charm. And when his mum confessed to it all - well out came the tissues again. And then Draco ran to the Granger's house of all places (didn't see that coming) and I was just a blubbering mess. I hold you totally responsible for the mess my computer desk is at the moment. LOL
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From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2008
I'm glad Ron and Arthur got their apologies out and I do think they meant them, I don't expect them to be forgiven straight away either but I'm glad Hermione and Draco were willing to listen, which is always a good start. I'm so pleased that she asked Blythe to be her attendant, that was a lovely touch and yes, I think I can hear the screams from here too. LMAO
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From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2008
Haha, I was just thinking how much Ron would curl over and die if he knew how much like Lucius he was and then I go and read it in this chapter. I am obviously like Angelina in your story, I'm forever sticking my foot in my mouth. I think the only time I open it is to change feet at times. Looks like Hermione and Draco just survived another little test. :)
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From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2008
You made me cry again. Again with Narcissa and Hermione. What a conversation. For the first time I really understood why Lucius is the way he is in your story and why Narcissa still loves him. Learning about love and forgiveness obviously takes a lot out of you and I can see why she tries so hard to hold on to Hermione and wants her friendship and understanding. As for Lucius and his little pre-nup he had made for Draco - good on Draco for standing up to him, I think Lucius liked that a lot and also, he just realised just how much Draco cares for Hermione and (okay it might just be me) I think he realises that Draco and Hermione have found the love that he found with Narcissa. Oh and I totally agree on the ickyness factor of Narcissa wanting to talk about sex with Lucius in front of Hermione. Ewwww! Although, Jason Issaccs on the other hand - well he sure knows how to make bad look good. LOL
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From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2008
Gosh darn you!! You made me cry in chap 22 when Hermione and Narcissa had their little heart to heart. I was in tears. Now I have to find tissues and chocolate. I hope you're happy now!! (joking)
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From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2008
Me again!! LOL Wow, Blaise and Beth got married!! I sure didn't see that coming, certainly not that fast. And reality did jump up and give them a nasty slap in the face, didn't it? But I'm going with that they work things out just fine. Still not sure where Ron is on all of this but I hope he comes around. I was surprised about Arthur siding with Ron too. I guess most fics have Molly going off her tree and him being the calm one. Nice to read something different then. But the son (or daughter) should not be punished for the mistakes their parents may have made) :) Oh and Narcissa's birthday party. OMG. I feel so for Hermione but Draco and Ginny are absolutely right, he did a lot to keep peace for her, it's only fair she tries to do the same. Although yeah, being back in that room would not be good but who knows (besides you, of course) LOL something good might come out of it too.
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From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2008
OMG Chapter 16 was so hot and they still haven't taken that final step. Whew!!!!
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From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2008
I totally agree, I wish there was somewhere to respond to reviews to as well. I just make do with adding something in the review column or say something on the next chapter if there is one. I'm pleased you liked that little one shot. I still can't get the darn song out of my head and I really enjoyed trying to write for that challenge.

As for your story, I LOVE it, this is so much fun and yet with every upheaval I am hanging on with baited breath wondering what's going to happen next. Man I was so wrong about Ron, I want to shake him even though I understand where he is coming from. And I am so excited that Beth and Blaise are making progress. I've just read where they went out for Chinese and he had that big argument with her for not staying true to herself and that he liked her just the way she was. What an awwwwwwwwww moment. :) And now I must continue (and ignore all domestic duties) so I can find out how Draco and Hermione get along at the Potter's. :)

Oh and I must add, please tell me you're writing something else because I would love to continue reading your stories. :)
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From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2008
Okayyyyyyyyyyyyy, maybe Ron didn't take that as well as I thought he might (you think - LOL) but I'm so glad Ginny came around and that it was Molly who helped bring her to her senses. Didn't see that one coming. :) I like that Harry is Hermione's rock so to speak and that they are at least trying to get along for Hermione's sake. Blaise is a right little shit stirrer, isn't he? I wonder if he will finally get tamed by Beth. Just imagine a pureblood with a muggle. LOL Guess I'll just keep reading and see. :)
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From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2008
Now I've only read the first three chapters so expect more reviews from me but I just had to stop and tell you - WOW!! I mean it sucks that your story got deleted but thank Merlin you put it back up for me to find. :) I LOVE your sense of humour. I love your portrayal of Blaise (I'd slip him AND Draco my number) LMAO. I haven't read many stories that take place in the US so I'll probably get confused with the flat/apartment bits but I'm sure I'll figure it out. Snoop seems totally awesome as a friend and I love how she and Ron just looked at each other and 'just knew'. Plus it makes the way clear for Draco without Ron coming across as a jerk. :) The bachelorette party sounds like a scream and I love how you have a mixture of muggles and magical folk hanging out together. I like how you described the mugglefolk as those 'with the sight'. Made perfect sense to me. :) And now I must read on and see what becomes of Draco now that Ginny pretty much chased him out of Hermione's apartment er flat. :)
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