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From LadyVoldemort87 on March 16, 2008
Well, maybe the sex is good
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From NutsAboutHarry on March 16, 2008
Wheeeeee! That chapter was worth a good fat slice of Death By Chocolate Mudcake with raspberries and sugared whipped cream on top! Who wouldn've thunk it? Lucius and Narcissa HUMAN!....LOL. I can't wait to see what you put in the next chappie and if it's good enough I might just take you out for a night on the town and a three course slap up dinner all the trimmings!...Oh how much of a suckhole am I?...LOL.

Seriously great job with the chappie....when will you be updating? TELL ME...Tee Hee!
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From melanthamalfoy on March 16, 2008
i love that narcissa's taking a tv to the manor lol
i'm quite intrigued by this lunch date with the parkinsons..
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From PotterEntourage on March 16, 2008
Incredible, simply incredible! Oh how I wish Hermione would have spoken to the Malfoy's in the great hall! Man! What the hell was JKR thinking? Draco was a child, he could be redeemed, sheesh! I loved Narcissa's description of Lucius, it's so spot on! Lovely chapter, just beautiful! Oh, and before I forget, the Parkinson lunch? Thought they fell out of favor from the party? Is Lucius keeping them around for business, or perhaps to put Pansy in young Draco's eyeline, or to watch the man squirm as only Lucius can do? Hmmmmmmmm?
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From Jullsy on March 15, 2008
Well H, I am really jalous now about your bath tubs in USA. I absolutly must try them when I come for the HP theme park ;).
Lemon means "Explicit sex stories in general, especially in anime fan fiction, are known as lemon, a term which comes from a Japanese slang term meaning "sexy" that itself derives from an early pornographic cartoon series called Cream Lemon."
"The term lime denotes a story that has sexual themes but is not necessarily explicit."
At least what's written in Wikipedia.
I am impatient for the next chapter. kisses
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From NutsAboutHarry on March 15, 2008
Wheeeee! Another sensational chappie!

I love how it was only Lucius's good breeding and manners that stopped him from chewing Hermione and to some degree Blythe out and I love Narcissa's child like enthusiasm at all things muggle! I'd love to see her let loose in somewhere like FAO Schwartz or Bloomingdales! She'd go na na...rofl! I can't wait to see how the cooking lessons go and how Ron and Harry work into the future chapters! Is Ron a total arse for the whole story? I hope not I really do like Ron even though he's a tad of a shit head. And what of Blaise and Beth? I want to know how they go and how long before he knocks her up! And for that matter IS Hermione up the duff or is she just sick from stress? Can stress make anyone ill like that? Methinks not!

Anyway great work and I cant wait til the next chapter I'm counting down the minutes til Sunday....LOL

Remember the offer of a death by chocolate mudcake is still there for a really meaty chapter!....ROFLMBFAO!

Okay I'm going away now!
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From miahdrake on March 15, 2008
Aww loved all the bonding going on in this chapter. And Lucius, Lucius is making an effort, and Draco professing his love for Hermione to his father that was amazing! I like your Blythe because I know a Blythe in my life lol! I love the fact that though this is fiction and obviously fictional characters a lot of them are relatable in subtles ways that make the story all the better! Once again, wonderful update and OMG I'm so excited that there'll be (at least) up to a chapter 39!!! HUGS -Miah :)
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From Kooldragon400 on March 14, 2008
I absolutely love your story, my dear! And Lucius is so true to form!

I particularly enjoyed the little private moment between Lucius and Narcissa. I personally like Lucius/Narcissa pairings, but everyone is just so freakin eager to kill her off...

I saw 'Wicked' on Broadway, and it was fantastic. The Wizard of Oz is what first sparked my interest in witches. And I'm sure I'm not the only muggle who refers to the Wicked Witch of the West for the image of a witch. I never liked Glinda....she was too sugary, even in the movie...

Anyway! Keep up the good work, and I'll keep reading!!
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From LadyVoldemort87 on March 14, 2008
'There, you freak. See? It
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From kazfeist on March 13, 2008
Sounds like the reception will have some fireworks after all! :D
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From miahdrake on March 12, 2008
I really like how this story is progressing and how the relationship between Draco and Hermione is evolving. I can't help but feel trouble brewing in the horizon, however I have full faith that you'll see us through it. Also, can someone slap Ron, I have this serious need to do so, he's still being so stubborn! Men! Great update as usual! BTW B&B's wedding read lovely! :) -MD
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From luvhp on March 12, 2008
OMG! I almost left early to go pick up a book from the bookstore (Dern library only has two copies and I am too impatient to wait for 4 more people to read it first, LOL)
So, I saw you had updated...YET again! Damn you make me look like such a slacker. I already have my next chapter 80% done, but honestly, I'm not quite happy with it.

But, I digress, back to YOUR story!

Wow, busy household this week. The speeches were lovely (I had to make one and I sucked, should have asked you for help :) had I only known )
So, you have me thinking: Draco's duties????? What could that possibly mean?? Obviously Narcissa wants Hermione in the family, but for aminute there I was nervous that there was already an arranged marriage or something. But, I know you would NEVER do that?!?! Right?!?!

Oh, and I SO want that big bathtub. *waggles eyebrows*
Crumb, time to go~!
Later
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From Jullsy on March 12, 2008
Hi H! What a nice chapter and a hot lemon. But I have a technical question - is this lemon possible in real life? Because this plot is not possible in our tub - too small. Are tubs bigger in US? kisses
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From NutsAboutHarry on March 12, 2008
Awwwwwwww no cookie dough scene not even for lil ole me?....**Pouts**....LOL

Seriously though great chappie...I had a good old giggle when my mind's eye puctured Narcissa bustin' a move on the dance floor and getting her groove on...hahahaha! I hope you make the next installment just as meaty...and I can't wait to see what Lucius says to Draco...dum de dum dum daaaaaaaah!....LOL

Great work and puh-leeeeeeeeeze hurry with the next chappie! (I'll bake you a death by chocolate mudcake if you do!....LOL)
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From melanthamalfoy on March 12, 2008
you.ROCK.
this chapter was so well written, and you capture every emotion so vividly, it's fantastic to read!
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