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Reviews for This is the Way I Die

By : graballz
  • From ANON - tas on July 22, 2008
    Very nicely done Graballz. Not much for the religious thing, but I liked your chapter. Could picture it in my head quite clearly as I was reading. The end was the best though in my opinion. Love the sexiness that these two share, and with the toy added...always a plus I think. Off to read the next installment.....

    ~tas
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  • From SParker on March 25, 2008
    I don't know HOW you do it, but NO one [author] can do sacrilegious & blasphemy
    like you. :-)

    It's TRULY a given talent of yours, methinks. :-]

    I just 'pray' for the day Harry & Draco's friends find out what they are, but
    that's a different story. Though it WOULD make for a good drama.

    ..and on a last note, your play was beautiful! Encore for the
    author/director, even though EVERYone knows the story, even
    atheists [weird, huh?]. I haven't had scenes affect me like that, when
    Harry was on the cross, since I saw 'The Passion of the Christ'...and YES, I
    liked the movie! Despite the bally-hoos & neg'tiv drama it inspired in most people,
    I was all about the message IN the movie, but I won't get into that or
    I'll have 2 LONG paragraphs.

    ..and yeah I did see it fitting that Harry played the role, no one
    else could have pulled it off.

    Anyway, just a last thought, I wouldn't call this a 'sequel' that
    you've done more of a 'story-insert'.
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  • From starcrossedkayla on March 24, 2008
    Hi. Sorry to post this here, I wanted to send you an email in response to your review of my remix but your email is hidden and I wasn't sure how else to contact you. Mine is starcrossedkayla@gmail.com I'd love to chat with you.
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  • From pittwitch on March 24, 2008
    Somehow I saw the Savior coming, hmmm, can't put a finger on why though ;)

    Honestly, I am enjoying "This is the way" series. So, in return for your review (which made me ecstatically happy, and I now feel like I have a cheering squad running around in cyber-space) here goes my favorite parts:

    Draco confusing Jonas and Judas - I personally thought that was hilarious.

    Poor Harry, the savior, anguished over his role once again, nice metaphor.

    Laughing out loud at the donkey -- we had a priest who rode one into church every Palm Sunday. Yes, a real donkey, black cross on its back and all, braying as it clippity clopped up the aisle.

    I would have liked a little more detail on the casting out of the merchants. I somehow could see Harry venting all his anger on the money-mongers much as he would have liked to do so on the "fan" girls fawning over him in the wizarding world. That in turn could have played into Draco's fascination with the angry Potter wielding his power thing a little more. I understand the compulsion to finish things. And, I'm not really trying to criticize, just that I think you could make that much more stronger and compelling. Maybe? A little edit? If I ask nicely and bat my lashes coyly? Or offer a sneaky-peek from Valentine, one author to another?

    The invisibility cloak comes to dramatic use at long last.

    And a drunken Draco giving away some of their secrets, and a HUGE one at that. Wow!

    Blasphemous word play you naughty naughty girl. I hope yours is a confessing church. Blasphemy, sacrilege, sinful, and they didn't even turn the dildo on yet. Oh my oh my oh my. Maybe I'm just glad I have a confessing church ;)

    Thanks for being brave enough to share a walk on the sacrilegious side here. Keep writing, Pitt


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  • From Roozette on March 24, 2008
    Aw yeah, you're back! I missed you mucho chica!

    I thought this was oddly sweet. Yes, sweet. I cracked up when Draco nominated Harry to be Jesus, and Draco as Mary? Priceless! I loved the emotion and how you managed to tie our boys into religion as well. Seriously... if Harry and Draco were in charge of presentations like this, there would be a lot more teens and young adults attending church!

    That said... Harry recovering from an emotionally draining week? Hurry up and write Break!!! Can't wait to see whether "Harry" will come support "Draco" as "he" dances again tonight :)

    Kisses!
    Roo
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  • From QueenB on March 24, 2008
    Sacri-licious. ;D

    I'm so happy to see the dildo in use! I just knew one of them would introduce it into sexplay and it's fun to see Harry being so mischievous. Draco is going to be in for truly spectacular sessions. And it *vibrates*... purrrrrr.


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  • From thrnbrooke on March 24, 2008
    I sooo loved this!
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on March 24, 2008
    Oh and I think I came to the conclusion that I have a habit of leaving excessively long reviews ..... you don't mind do you?? LOL.
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on March 24, 2008
    Hey! Wow I really like that. When they said something about saviour when announcing the new Jesus I was like oh god Draco's put Harry up to be "THE SAVIOUR" Again! lol. And then when Draco said who he would be playing I nearly choked on the drink i was drinking at the time, I was like how fitting for those two, but boy would Jesus be rolling in his grave (if he'd stayed in it) if he could see what was playing him and Mary. Seriously two gay men playing some of the main parts in a highly CHRISTIAN service, I've never seen it done, although I would love to believe this could happen, something ironic in it.

    Sorry, I just have to ask, what do you believe in? You can't be fully Christian, because this whole story was EXTREMELY Blasphemous, but yet you lead a Youth Group? Or are like a leader in a Youth Group or something, and still go to church. I can't really talk, I read and write this kind of thing and much worse kinds of stuff too, with all kinds of kinks and fetishes which in themselves are sins, never mind being blasphemous, but in high school, I went to an all girls Christian school, and in my last year I was the Chapel Convenor (Convenor's are a student leader position for a lot of activities and kinds of things around the school, like there was Media, Library, Assemblies and Special Functions, Archives, Music, Drama, Publications and the list goes on) Somehow I ended up the Chapel Convenor and had to go to all the services, read bible passages in the service, pray in the service, carry in the bible and candle, organize services etc, but I didn't really believe in any of what I was doing. I do have faith though, that's what I believe in, faith in itself. I don't believe in Religion, because I believe that putting a denomination on it is what causes war, I mean look at all the Religious wars that have been fought over history 'in the name of our lord god' or 'for allah' or what ever. Religion causes war, whereas faith that there is something out there watching over us, and that everything happens for a reason, will set you free, is the answer. That's what I believe.

    Otherwise, I love the appearance of another dildo! I liked the symbolism of it being Slytherin Green! lol. I can't wait to see what happened over their spring break in the next story, I'm real exciting about you starting to post that!! And I was really excited when Draco started saying I don't think you can die, and was all like you didn't die as a baby and then you died and came back etc, and I was like *squeal!!!!* lol I'm sorry for some reason I like the idea of their muggle friends finding out just a little of their history, or even having some rouge Death Eaters track Harry and Draco down and try to kill them in the middle of a frat party and they have to defend everyone and then later on have to explain to their close friends who they are, and what just happened. I dno why, it's just something I like to read, when done well, and I think you would do it well. Having said that, it's your story, and you can take it where you want!

    Thanks for a great read (although I really should have been studying for that exam I have coming up .... like .... TOMORROW SHIT ..... oh well)
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From bananasforyou on March 24, 2008
    wow that was bloody fantastic!
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  • From MisstressNicole on March 23, 2008
    *applaudes* I think I'm going to take a quick shower! That was 'fan-bloody-tastic*! The story, the irony, the blasphemy and the sex. Again you have out done yourself.

    Nikki


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  • From DarQuing on March 23, 2008
    Very good story. I think Harry would make a good Jesus. :)

    And I doubt you're going to Hell. You do have blackmail material on JC. ;)
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  • From alleycat88 on March 23, 2008
    That was excellent! Very well done!
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