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Reviews for AFTERWARDS

By : neelix
  • From Lauriurix on April 06, 2008
    oowwwww man! :')

    this story rocked! rockz whatev u get it =)

    wonderfull story and ill go and read your other stuff n___n
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  • From Jocelyn25 on April 06, 2008
    it was very beautiful! Loved it. So soft and sweet and Severus words were the best !!!!

    Love Jocy

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  • From Angie30 on April 06, 2008
    What a lovely chapter! I loved the ceremony it was beautiful
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  • From Sampdoria on April 06, 2008
    What a beautiful story! I don't know why I have only "skimmed" it every now and then earlier, but today I sat down and read it all. I am so impressed, and kind of happy that by "skimming" earlier, I now had the deligthful pleassure of reading 33 chapters in one go, it has been time well spent. I whish I had started reading earlier so I could have reviewed several times to point ot several of the brilliant moments this story has, as it is, this last chapter with the wedding is closest to my mind, but what a chapter!!! I am so impressed, it was so beautiful, I am totally in love with your story! I hope you will be writing more stories after this one? I know I will be looking for more stories written by you!
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  • From Jocelyn25 on April 06, 2008
    Thats because your story IS lovely !!!! *g
    Another lovely chapter, funny, serious, emotional...you manage to portray a whole lot of feelings in 1 chapter. I love that!
    Tough i am still pouting that there is only one more chappie to come *lol*

    Love*hugs*
    Jocy
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  • From chloeshellie on April 05, 2008
    beautiful! *sniff*
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  • From Carine on April 05, 2008
    Hi neelix,your story is great
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  • From kittyperry on April 04, 2008
    This has been an amazing story, which has been written and presented wonderfully. I've really enjoyed it and thank you for sharing such a passionate and lovely romance. Snape is so amazingly dashing and sexy, and he made me ache and long to be in Hermione's place. Well done. Please update soon.
    Kitty
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  • From neelix on April 04, 2008
    hi all,

    I could keep going forever with this I guess but then it would always be a WIP and I may lose heart!!!

    I love Severus and Hermione, I love this story, But... I can't write about every time they end up in the sack!!!

    So... two more chapters and an epilogue will tie it up!!

    So glad you are still enjoying the story!! Thanks again everyone for the positive feedback.
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  • From Jocelyn25 on April 04, 2008
    This ritual was awesome !!! Can i please get that for my one wedding some day? *g
    i really loved it, but it made my heart cry to see that there are only 2 chapters left. Are you sure you dont want to write about children and so on? *G

    Love your story. It is truly amazing!

    Love
    Jocy
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  • From SavineSnape on April 04, 2008
    ^guh^ truely beautiful story. I love how you have got them to experience each others emotions towards each other, a true sign of their deep love for each other. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From shanarenea on April 04, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait for more.
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  • From neelix on April 04, 2008
    Thanks Jocy... I really do care about the plot! I like lemons but not a massive fan of PWP... dont like mean Severus either... he's getting mushier by the second in my story!!!

    Wishyouwerehere - thanks for your postive feedback, it really makes me happy!
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  • From Jocelyn25 on April 04, 2008
    you are quite wrong about this not being a good chapter. I really appreciate that youdont put lemon after lemon in there. It makes us readers realize that you really like your plot and so do I !!! *g

    Kepp it coming ;)
    Jocy
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  • From wishyouwere on April 04, 2008
    Ok - so I will admit that I had no idea where Severus had gone. My head went immediately to the place of rogue Death Eaters or the possibility of a new Dark Lord. It is true, I am a victim of the fanfic cliches! This was a great chapter. Your lemons are full of lip puckering goodness! I love that there is almost a new chapter (or more) each day. Please keep writing and updating regularly. I cannot wait to see how this ends.
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