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Reviews for Thunder On The Hill

By : Musemisery
  • From ANON - Lucinda on November 27, 2009
    This is wonderful! I'm so incredibly disappointed that you're not still writing. Or do you have it archived elsewheres? Really, this is one of the funniest things I've read. I laughed and laughed. Your Draco is terrific, and you've an excellent start on an intriguing plot. Here's hoping that you're just waiting for your Muse and/or RL to slow down. Regardless, it was too good not to leave a review, and it would be wonderful to see you pick this back up.
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  • From Mehuh on October 07, 2008
    ...T.T I seem to be reading all the good ones that aren't finished today. This was really good. I do hope you continue it. And I hope I'm lucky enough to find it again one day!!! Good job!!!
    Makes me wonder how you'd write a BZ/HG/DM... (and that's my fave.. .well you can't really say pairing, can you? ;P)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2008
    I wondered if perhaps this story was going to be about MY favourite trio, Draco, Blaise and Hermione. LOL Perhaps not, but regardless I love where your story is going and I would very much like to read some more.

    And oh to have been in the room when Molly asked Draco if he was gay!!!
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  • From ichiruki on May 17, 2008
    Got a kick out of the owl having fur vs feathers in chapter two, lol. I think the story has potential, but a beta would catch these things. If you can get a beta to help you with it, then it will polish things up.
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  • From Musemisery on May 17, 2008
    Hey! Yes. I expected some people who'd read the original chapter to be a bit upset, but it's something I had to do. I loved the chapter myself, but something just didn't sit right with me. The problem (for me, at least) with publishing as you write is that it's a bit like painting yourself into a corner in public, on occassion. Everyone has to watch you stumble about on wet paint and get it all over your brand new trainers. The truth is, the reason this update took so LONG, was the original chapter. I couldn't find anywhere to go after I'd written it, and after much thought I decided it was because I'd written too much, too soon. I had two choices; abandon the story altogether, or rewrite the damn thing from scratch. Rest assured, everything you've read will come into affect eventually, (though that certianly will not ruin the story for you, I promise) but now just wasn't the right time for that particular conversation. There was a lot more I wanted to cover between Draco and Hermione before that all came to light, and I regret that I didn't sit on that chapter for awhile before posting it for some to see, because I'd had a strange feeling about it as soon as it was written it. (Hence, why I'd only posted it my journal and not on the various sites this story is also on.) HOWEVER, I do feel that I'm back on track with it now, and it's still very much the same story, so I hope you'll forgive me and continue to read. :) As for Draco being 'gay' being cliche, I think it's extrememly comical, because well, he is rather prisy isn't he? Perhaps it's cliche because it's true? :P

    (Oh merlin, I hope not!!!)
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  • From ANON - Parri on May 17, 2008
    What was wrong with the earlier version? I must say I've read an earlier version of chapter 3 and I loved that version much much more than this one. It was so original and creative. This version is a bit cliche, frustrated and embarrassed Draco is in every D/Hr fic. The whole thing with Draco being gay has been done in so many other fics.

    I was looking forward to an update for so long maybe I would of been disappointed with anything but I didn't expect you to rewrite the last chapter.
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  • From bananasforyou on March 28, 2008
    oh your good!
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  • From kazfeist on March 27, 2008
    Hah! You're putting this here! Dare I hope you've added to the mystery? I so enjoyed the first couple chapters you'd written before. :D
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  • From bananasforyou on March 27, 2008
    omg so good especially the end but i wish it was more chaps!please!
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