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Reviews for Lord Lucius

By : Wolverinegal
  • From ANON - Grace on October 08, 2016

    I love this story! There are three major reasons that made me completely fangirl: the first is I am obsessed with musical theatre and Les Miserables is one of my favourites: the second is that he braided Harry's hair, which is another thing I love; the third is that Lucius was a lord. I did get kind of wierd about the sex- it was a bit rushed and a little nom-con or at least dun-con.

     


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  • From anniea on December 06, 2008
    interesting! like it a lot! *kisses*
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  • From hauntoftwilight on December 02, 2008
    that was precious
    twilight
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  • From on November 29, 2008
    yeah great chapter. is there going to be a squeal.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2008
    really shit
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  • From Wolfsfrau on July 18, 2008
    short, but sweet! =)
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  • From anniea on April 14, 2008
    aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh that was so cute *kisses*
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  • From alma on March 30, 2008
    Wow! I liked it alot!!!!
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  • From DarkGothic on March 30, 2008
    that was such a nice story I liked it It wasn't mushy or cliche it's almost the perfect love story =^.^=
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 29, 2008
    sweet one-shot
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  • From LadyoftheShadows86 on March 29, 2008
    I think a sequel of the wedding would be nice...
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  • From h2elena on March 28, 2008
    That was lovely to short but really enjoyable reading.Could we have more of lucius and harry please. There are just not enough stories with them as a couple.
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  • From Sagenwarrior on March 28, 2008
    awww that was sweet
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  • From ANON - Lea on March 28, 2008
    Love it.
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  • From Vampirezdarkgurl on March 28, 2008
    it was a pretty good story, but it seemed to progress quickly.

    For example Harry and Lucius didn't know each other and it quickly progressed to them having sex...now I know you said they were mates, but a story like this should have at least two or three chapters, one for them to find each other (since in this story they didn't know one another), another for them to get to know one another, and finally the piece de resistance the mating. ;).

    Also we don't really know anything about Harry, like you gave us a brief description of what he looks like (not that we don't know what he looks like), but how old is he, and how did he come to live with his relatives (how did his parents die).

    Don't let this review discourage you, I mean no harm by writing it just to help you improve.

    What I do when I write is think about what you've read in other stories and what you'd want to read in a story and put that in your story. (For example I know I'd want to know how old Harry is, so add in with the description: An 18 year old boy with shining emerald green eyes and shoulder length raven locks.)

    I hope that this didn't discourage you, like I said above I only wish to help you improve your writing, and help you with something you might not have realized was missing.

    I look forward to reading more from you. Keep up the good work. :)
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