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Reviews for Il Veela Vincola

By : JaganshiMalfoy
  • From nbditzybrunette on May 01, 2010
    Please update and finish. Very good story.
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  • From Salios on December 11, 2008
    You have a good start, and good control over your sentence structure. I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes, but maybe that's because i was enjoying this first chapter too much. AFF screws around with your formatting, so just be careful when you're writing 'letters' or 'flashbacks' on this site and go back and re-edit them (or italicize).

    Hope to see more soon!
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  • From MidnightWhisper on May 17, 2008
    I look forward to reading the next chapter. The title has me interested. Take care and Blessed Be.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 08, 2008
    Sooo can't wait for chapter 2!!!
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  • From Veracityrules on March 29, 2008
    This is good from what I have read so far. My only comment is the double spacing is rather distracting; I know the format on here tricky to master. But beside that, you've got yourself a regular reader here.
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  • From alleycat88 on March 29, 2008
    WHAT!? A CLIFFIE!??!?!?!? AHHHH! PLEASE MORE IM SO INTRIGUED BY THIS FIC! AND YES IM YELLING CAUSE YOU HAVE ME HOOKED!!!
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  • From Caldonya on March 29, 2008
    Nice Beginning with a nice little hook at the end too : ) Quite nice especially for your first one.
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  • From bananasforyou on March 28, 2008
    its interesting ... whos at the door? draco maybe.
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on March 28, 2008
    Very good cant wait to read more.
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  • From RRW on March 28, 2008
    I think this is shaping up to be a fabulous story...waiting patiently for the next chapter to see who was at the door.
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  • From electricme on March 28, 2008
    I like it!! ^_^ your doing very well for this to be your first fanfic. keep up the good work and pleasee update soon
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