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By : shanarenea
  • From Heidi191976 on April 01, 2008
    Another great chapter. I am glad that Hermione is alright and that Ron got caught by Severus and Harry. Ruthie is a very special little girl, being able to sense when Severus and her mother are hurt. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From wicraven on April 01, 2008
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From KyKy on April 01, 2008
    I am so curious about how ruthie can tell when people are in danger, (more specifically, when snape is). Her connection with him is strong. And although he is a little OOC, I love it! It shows the softer side of him that we all know he really has. Cant wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2008
    please please update soon. i hate cliffhangers. i love it so far.

    foofie
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  • From jessirose85 on March 31, 2008
    I love the interaction between Ruthie and Severus....Hermione hurt?? I wonder if Ruthie will tell her new best friend...great work..update soon xx
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  • From Sampdoria on March 31, 2008
    If that is Ron in Hermiones rooms, hitting her, I want you to neuter him with a toothpick.....
    And please, whoever it is, don't let him rape her, I hate it when evil-doers sucess in their actions.
    Update again soon!
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  • From SidneyRae on March 31, 2008
    this is great. i really like it. please post soon.
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  • From miamadwyn on March 31, 2008
    I'm fascinated by your story, and am happy to see such frequent updates. In particular, I'm delighted and surprised that Ruthie's connection to Snape doesn't seem to be that she's his daughter, but that as an innocent, she can heal him. I think it's a refreshing twist, and look forward to seeing what comes next!
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  • From Angie30 on March 31, 2008
    Whoa! That took me by surprise for sure. I wonder if it was Ron who hit her on the head, he is being such a git and Percy is playing him like a fiddle. I was thinking she was raped or something but I could be wrong. I love how Ruthie knows when Severus is being called and is hurt she has a real knack for that stuff. Makes me wonder if she got a bit of seer in her. Fabulous Story I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 31, 2008
    I hope that Hermione will be alright. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From rosebud360 on March 31, 2008
    Everyday I read something from this site. Your summary interested me from the first posting. Then you had me hooked before I finished the first chapter! So far there are elements of a possible juicy love story (oh yeah!), secrets, intrigue; and Ruthie is the most adorable character since Dobby. Your grammar and sentence structure are also refreshingly good. I encourage you to keep at it. You're very good. You have the basis for a real page-turner, and I'm looking forward to every chapter. I have saved your story to my Favorites so I can keep it updated and read it again when its finished! Good Luck.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 31, 2008
    This was great. I hope that Hermione can manage to avoid Ron so that she doesn't get hurt. I started thinking about how you said Ruthie is 2yrs old, but if she was born in August after Hermione's 5th year, then she wouldn't be that old, if Hermione is just starting her 7th year, right. For Ruthie to be 2years old, Hermione would have had to of gotten pregnant during Christmas of her 4th year. I still love this story and look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From marcia on March 31, 2008
    Good job on ch 3. You forgot to do your spacing during dialogue on ch 4. Try adding more narrative. Tell me what they're feeling, thinking. If you need help email me. I'm happy to help someone who actually wants to get better at writing. I'm working on my own project right now so I can't beta but I can give pointers if you want. Keep trying and don't get discuraged.
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  • From prettypinkpony on March 31, 2008
    oh intriguing. Who is the father...? Buh buh buhuhuhuh. If you have a mailing list for updates please put me on it. Nellie

    noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
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  • From wishyouwere on March 31, 2008
    Another good chapter. Can you explain why Ron and harry are there over the summer? I would have expected them to be at #12.
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