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Reviews for A Tiny Little Full-blown Obsession

By : dirtydarella
  • From ANON - L_C on March 30, 2008
    Amazing!

    Wish you'd not ended it there though! There is nothing better than a story that goes really deep into a relationship and feelings.

    loved it!
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  • From Utopia on March 30, 2008
    I think I'd like to watch that little obsession for myself! yummy!

    11/10 for quality!
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  • From bananasforyou on March 30, 2008
    oh thats hot!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 30, 2008
    would have posted last night but got cut off by the ''AFF downtime'', crap.

    Hmm..DirtyD, short for Dirty 'Deeds', right? :-)

    That was sooo good & the ending was sooo sweet, I'm still in a haze.

    The only thing you need is to double check some of the grammar other than that you do brillant work thus far.

    I like how in-depth you are in your stories. Now this one could have been a
    ''two-shooter'', just to see the end results of the ''reaction of the friends'',
    especially Hermione, whom Harry needs to apologize to for being such an ass. After
    all, he DID ask for her help.

    Well, that's that...and I'll be on the lookout for whatever else you do.
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  • From Calrissian18 on March 30, 2008
    Oh, that was absolutely "beautiful," to quote Harry's many declarations. The characters were amazingly well depicted and believable and I am astounded that you managed such a successful portrayal of them within the length of a one-shot. I loved the carefully developed attraction and was as frustrated as Hermione when Harry refused to confront Malfoy about his newborn feelings. A truly well planned and all encompassing story, you did a fantastic job with the writing of it and the relaying of the character's motivations.

    However, I have to mention this or it will eat away at me, you wrote 'dawned his cloak,' I believe you meant 'donned his cloak.' I'm sorry but homophones drive my insane, in my own work as well, the sneaky little buggers sound just fine while really taunting you with their alternate meanings. All the other mistakes are human and unavoidable nor do they detract from the plot for me. But that one line, it just would not let me go. I still loved this story and I hope beyond hope that you will write more. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From alleycat88 on March 30, 2008
    Excellent dear! Poor Harry! I laughed at him the entire story! Until the end that is.....
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