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Reviews for Green Is The Colour Of.....

By : Jilliane
  • From dirtydarella on September 12, 2008
    Aww, it's over?
    *sniff sniff*
    I always feel so empty when things end. :(
    But this last chapter was so poetic, so beautifully written. The whole thing was!
    I'm glad I got to read such a wonderful story, you are simply amazing. ^_^
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  • From jljaina on September 10, 2008
    I really like this. very sweet ending. but so sad to start with. very well written. very poetic.
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  • From ANON - mino on September 09, 2008
    awww it's over now?
    I liked this story >3>
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  • From ANON - Bones on September 09, 2008
    *Bawls* that was defiantly well wroth the wait.
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  • From cravedom on September 09, 2008
    Ah, there is that introspective behavior that makes your Severus so believable. Severus has a habit of making assumptions based on what he perceeves as truth, and because he is alone much of the time it would seem he has all the time in the world to come up with likely scenarios and later elaborate. The amazing thing is that Harry while apparently having an oposite personality does the same thing! One would think that with that penchant there would be plenty of comedy but the results are usually so tragic.

    When I read the first few chapters of your story it occured to me that you got that. There was a strong likelihood that both this characters would continue assuming and expanding and becomeing obsessed; the differece and once again you got it, is that Harry will be moved to do something about it while Severus would just hide behind his bitterness.


    Well, it may be to late, but simply what I wanted to say was that Severus is a complex character and your portrayal stayed true.

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  • From padme82 on September 09, 2008
    Ok, I admit to reading this twice as I was a bit confused the first time. Then I checked the title and went "ahh." Lovely way to end the story, dear. I love your Snape's POV. He's always the right amount of tormented.
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 09, 2008
    Ah! I knew you would find a good way to end the story. And now you've finished a story. Congratulations on a job well done. I hope you are happy with yourself, because the story was well told and the ending perfect.
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  • From ANON - The Sick Puppy - I'm not signed in cuurently! on September 09, 2008
    Oh, wow! I spent the first half of this going "What? He didn't turn Harry away did he?!" You have no idea how relieved I was to read the line that green was no longer the colour of being alone! And the little baby? So cute. I "aww"-ed out loud!

    Really really impressed. If this what you do when I utter innocently, I should say more innocent stuff!

    And congratulations on completing your first fic! Nothing quite like the buzz of that first one!

    Erm...Author's Notes? Maybe? Please? SP
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  • From tambrathegreat on September 04, 2008
    Chapter 6:

    I like that line about Harry's being Heaven and Hell and everything in between.

    What a hurtful thing for Harry to say, about leaving Severus for dead in the shack, and what a hurtful thing to say back. Good chapter.

    Chapter 7:

    Such well written conflict in this chapter. I like that you are portraying Severus with his sense of self-preservation intact. The ice wall is particularly effective.

    Chapter 8:

    Oh, good chapter. I can actually see the situation spinning out, and Severus losing his iron control. I liked the furtive, almsot shameful description of Severus losing himself and his way of taking the problem in hand, so to speak. I wonder what his house guest heard.

    Chapter 9:
    Woot! I'm glad Harry had the courage to confront SEverus. It's sad that both of them suffered so long under the delusion of Lily's love.

    Chapter 10:

    Oh, there is no chapter ten yet. How disappointing. HINT.



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  • From tambrathegreat on September 04, 2008
    Chapter 1

    This opening chapter is very lyrical, almost written like a poem. I liked it. ALOT.

    Chapter 2

    Another good chapter. I loved how you made Severus unable to speak. It opens the possiblities in the story, and finally gives Harry a voice around Snape. I can sense things are going to change between these two.

    Chapter 3

    Aw, that was sweet, that Harry said Severus' voice was the most beautiful thing he had ever hear, especially since he was rebuking Harry at the time. Our old Severus is back.

    What is it hat Severus wants to tell him? I am very curious.

    Chapter 4

    That was sad. I liked how you reiterated the points that made Harry not need Severus and then echoed how much Severus truly desired Harry. Nice effect that.

    Chapter 5'

    Nice thoughts on Ginny from Severus' POV. Again, at the end of the chapter I am struck by the poetry of the last few paragraphs. I really like this story.


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  • From LoveForSandi on August 30, 2008
    Thats so sweet.
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  • From cravedom on August 29, 2008
    Well look at that we got a review just in time for the long weekend. I am very happy that you have found whatever you needed to continue.


    Severus and I were very surprised by this turn of events, well he was more surprised than me because I knew Harry loved him; what I did not know was that Harry would beat him to the confesion. That does make perfect sense however since Harry is the more emotional one.


    Sooo, what now? Will he go back to London? Will he stay were he is and Harry visits on his days off? I know the story was about the way Severus felt about oblivious Harry but it would be nice to have a little insight to their future, (call it closure)that is after all the kind thing to do :p
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  • From Veracityrules on August 29, 2008
    Well worth the wait and thanks for the email alert.

    Fab update!
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  • From dirtydarella on August 29, 2008
    aww, so sweet. Of course it's you that he loves, Harry!
    This chapter was lovely, I really enjoyed their interaction together.
    And you're so good at dialogue! *Is jealous*



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  • From ANON - zer0 on August 29, 2008
    beautiful!!! great fic, i like how it went from laps of time!! and the end of this last chapter!!! aahh.. i
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