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Reviews for Green Is The Colour Of.....

By : Jilliane
  • From MJurjevic on October 15, 2011
    Lovely ending! If anyone deserves a happy ending, it's these two! Really lovely full circle and a feeling of 'rightness' & completion & being whole for both! Love your prosaic prose and dynamics & flow in your work - Keep writing!
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  • From MJurjevic on October 15, 2011
    At long last, they were able to reveal their feelings for one another - lovely work!
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  • From MJurjevic on October 13, 2011
    Oh,oh, oh - the dynamics and pace is really heating up! I meant to write something in the last review about Harry being a man, and not a boy, but Harry pointed that out just now - HA! Can really feel Sev's turmoil & self-denial - great chapter!
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  • From MJurjevic on October 13, 2011
    Love the dynamics of this chapter - the shielded, defensive Sevberus and an assertive, determined Harry seeking the truth and refusing to be rejected/ignored! The ending - straight through the heart! great chapter!
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  • From MJurjevic on October 13, 2011
    Mmm... nice flow of events; and the pain of seeing Harry with Ginny; he may have found seclusion, but not peace in his snug hideaway in Scotland - he's haunted by memories & feelings - they're not going to go away just because he changed location - poor Sev!
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  • From MJurjevic on October 13, 2011
    Aww... sweet & sad - poor Severus! Yes, now having to live in the post-Voldy war, a survivor, and the poignant loneliness & realisation of missing Harry's presence - well done! Lovely work!
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  • From MJurjevic on October 13, 2011
    Love the slow progression of healing & observation from Sev, his awareness and slowly seeing Harry & his world differently. Intrigued about the many other memories of Severus' past!:)
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  • From MJurjevic on October 12, 2011
    It's truly wonderful of what might/could have been. Love Severus' point of view/vulnerable & poignant observation and feelings, as well as Harry's remorse & new-founded awareness. Lovely work! (I'm having a hectic day, hope to catch up more with reading tomorrow evening)
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  • From MJurjevic on October 12, 2011
    Love it - love your detailed description and tone/atmosphere immediately captured. Reading on!
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  • From countesszero on February 25, 2010
    apologies for not reviewing between the chapters :S but i read them so quickly - i'm in love with pining!severus and persistent!harry - and the end was so sweet! - off to read your other stories :)
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  • From countesszero on February 25, 2010
    you had me at this chapter! harry's sorrow is so sweet!
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  • From anonymouslyours on February 03, 2010
    Truly beautiful and touching. I definitely had tears in my eyes for much of the story. It's refreshing to read a story written only from severus' point of view which is so often neglected or innacurate if their relationship was canon. I can't find any other stories like this, and I have been searching for a long time- writers seem to be more keen to write cliche smut rather than the unique relationship between the two, which makes them such an inspiring couple to read/write about. Really well done.
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  • From starstruck86 on October 13, 2009
    Hello! I looked on your profile after your review of my story (and thank you so much for it, btw).

    This story is so beautiful. Even though the chapters are short I don't think i've ever felt so accutely in tune with a character's pain as Severus' in your story. The uncluttered nature of it only did it more justice.

    Really, very touching! I will read the others when I get some time.
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  • From cravedom on January 29, 2009
    Feeling accomplished? Does it feel bitter-sweet like sending the kids to college? Sometimes I feel a little sad when a story is over and I am just a reader. However since you still have some stories to finish and they all have your wonderful Severus it is not too, too sad.

    Your story inspired a bit of an exercise back when I was complaining your summary was not good enough for your story. It occurred to me that I wanted to see what color would make me think of my loved ones (one color for each one). The thing is that since we all have brown eyes I could not go with that and there was not a distinctive favorite color either. So I decided to just close my eyes and think of one person and see what would happen. I started with my brother since his death has always been a source of heartache and it seemed that would be helpful in this case. It turns out chuckles is what I relate my brother with and that was unexpected, I thought it would be something visual.
    Anyhow, that made me wonder what kind of things would make Harry think of Severus while they were apart. Was it the sound of fast steps down a corridor? The smell of a potion ingredient? The color black? Bats?

    I do hope that this is just the first of many finished stories and that they are all appreciated by your readers.

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  • From ANON - Krysty on January 29, 2009
    That is a BEAUtiful story!!!!!!! The last two chapters made me tear up!! Thank you so much for sharing this marvelous story!!!!!!!
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