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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From luvlivsmile on April 05, 2008
    I was a little sad you weren't writing, but I totally understand life getting in the way. Plus you came back with an awesome story! I hope one of those other stories you said was in your head has my love Lucius in it, but till then I am more than happy to read this one. THANK YOU
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  • From ANON - LauraK on April 05, 2008
    Love this story!! I hope it isn't too awful when she has to go back....of course he'll remember! That's the heardest, right? Knowing who she is when she shows up at Hogwarts at the age of 11 and then having to wait for her to experience it all......just great! Can't wait for more! LK
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on April 04, 2008
    Another brilliant chapter SG!

    Hoping for more soon!

    xx
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  • From kittyperry on April 04, 2008
    Oh wow - this story is beyond wonderful and cool, it is just perfect. I love young Severus, and the plot is incredible. Please update more soon, and lemons would be welcome :P
    Kitty
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  • From Drkstdwn262 on April 04, 2008
    this story is so cute. I like it a lot. :)
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  • From Utopia on April 04, 2008
    only 19.

    *giggle* I know we're on about another era here, but the age of consent in the UK is 16... by 19, me n the hubby-to-be were practically pros! lol! Though, the era of free love is long before my time.

    Eh, 19? Doesn't 7th year put them at 17, 18 at a pinch? That's the equivalent of UK 6th form. OWLs are the wizarding GCSEs, and NEWTS are wizarding A and A2 levels.

    Though, train snuggles were soooooo cute! Sev has a heart; though I suspect a fair proportion of it is still black as coal, but it's got a little silver lining! (And for some strange reason, I got the image of a lump of coal wrapped in silver hologramatic paper and tied with a green ribbon?! *eh?*).

    Lucius is a few years older, and has already ploughed head-first into the underworld! I think sex, drugs and rock-and-roll probably gets a whole new meaning with the death-eaters-in-training! Snape is undoubtedly powerful, and with an angel on his arm, his arm might just end up mark-free? *prepared to beg.*

    Peter gives me the creeps. *shudders* he's like a skanky Hugh Heffner, but without the playboy bunnies! (does that make sense?).

    Sirius and James both need a slap for their behaviour! They're nothing but bullies who find joy in vicimisation of those weaker than them, or those who stand out! I always wondered how the marauders got such a 'positive' light from JKR? Remus is sweet, and like Snape needs to belong somewhere - but his choice of people to belong with is lacking... but I guess he didn't have much choice as a lonely lad. *sigh*

    I giggled at his comment that his house leader (Slughorn??) would probably give him points for sneaking a Gryffindor girl back to his room! LOL! And the double takes of the others was hillarious! I've been on the end of the double takes when out with Andy! Nobody believed that such a handsome lad would want the bookwormish swot!

    I love the playful antics between the two in his bed, he's trying to be the perfect gentleman and she's not letting him! I wonder if his gentlemanly actions (rare for a 17-year-old-who's-permenantly-horny) are due to witnessing the horrendous behaviour of his Father?

    Let me think, I normally manage to sneak a request for something in... we've had Lucius tying corsets, and giving her parents a dragon... what strange wizarding thing is young Snape going to do? Hermione's a virgin, and a lot of fics have him collect the blood for potions... but it might be a smidge cliche and obvious... so some strange ritual thingy or something? A long time ago, the parents would watch a wedding night to make sure the deed happened, and then hang the blood-stained sheets out of the window (and I think the Romanian?? gypsies do something similar still, but its a stained white nightie tied to a chicken)... So, maybe a special sheet with runes and spells on it to safeguard a young couple or something?? Maybe it could be shrunk down, halved and put into a precious-metal locket or something as a powerful protective ward to protect them both?? Voldie will be on the up-and-up, they'll need the protection.

    Oh heck! what if Hermione's involvement changes time? What if a potion is needed for the horcruxes? And if Snape didn't get a dark mark... Lilly and James wouldn't have died; Harry might have had siblings; Neville's parents would be OK and aurors... it would re-write EVERYTHING.

    11/10!
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on April 04, 2008
    this is an amazing story! please update soon! i love how severus is!
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  • From ANON - Domine on April 04, 2008
    Well I'm glad you wrote it. I'm loving young Sev and bold Hermione. I don't know if I can find anymore nakeds, I haven't even found that same one again. But I'll send any good Slytherin stuff your way.
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  • From ANON - slytherin-princess on April 04, 2008
    Wow, Wow and wow some more!!!! I just want to keep reading and reading and am so disappointed when i get to the end of each chapter. I too am not a great fan of time travel fics to I admit, I didn't read this one from the start. I think I started to read after you posted chapter 7. Now I'm hooked! I'm glad I gave this one a chance.
    Peter is giving me the willies, I could see that slimy little rat bastard forcing himself upon our heroine. EWW!! And I do love that Hermione gave those marauders the what-for. They really were just bullies. No Wonder Sev hates Harry so much. And don't even get me started on prick teasing cow, Lily.

    Anyways, to sum up: I LOVE THIS FIC and YOU for writting it. May your plot bunnies abound(LOL) & I hope this review finds you well.

    Hoping to read alot more real soon

    Your new SUPER-FAN!!!

    Slytherin-princess
    XxXx
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  • From docjen on April 04, 2008
    Wow! That is all I can say is Wow! This is the first time I have reviewed one of your storiees, even though I have read them all and am a huge fan. I am really enjoying your portrayal of the young Severus and the true Gryffindor that is Hermoine. Keep up the great work and I look forward to you next update.
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  • From SavineSnape on April 04, 2008
    I love this fic especially because it's Young!Snape having a better time :D can't wait to see where this ends up. Sav
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  • From ANON - Ophelia on April 04, 2008
    MORE! *stomps foot* please???? with chocolate covered severus' on top???
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  • From ANON - Caro on April 04, 2008
    Thank you!
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  • From goldentrio on April 04, 2008
    i want more!!! Lol. I love that you update so quickly, not a lot of authors are like that.
    Hermione is being sooo bold but that's a good thing because that means limes have to be on the way.
    This is beginning another one of my faves by you. :)
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  • From IncaShine on April 04, 2008
    Again, I have to say it's nice to see such a well written 'time' fic. This is the best that I've read so far.

    I can't wait to see the next chapter, and a glimpse of Hermione thrown into Severus's home life. Not many people take that route so it will be very interesting.

    On the creepy Wormtail note: the actor that played him in the movie (Timothy Spall) even squicked me in Sweeney Todd...
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