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Reviews for Runaway Mate

By : Wolverinegal
  • From dominique1 on April 09, 2008
    oh that was so sweet but im still waiting to see what happens with ron and herm
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  • From Jan on April 09, 2008
    Wow! Very interesting start. I love it!

    Please update chapter 4 soon. ^_^

    Jan
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  • From alma on April 08, 2008
    A very good chapter!!!!YUMMY
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  • From alma on April 08, 2008
    Good chapter!
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  • From alma on April 08, 2008
    Good start, my kind of story!!!
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  • From Bastian on April 08, 2008
    Aww the end was so sweet! Great chapter! Since Harry went into heat can he get pregnant now? I always thought Harry and Lucius' children would be adorable!

    Glad you cleared up the dom sub thing, sorry if I am making your writing more difficult with asking those questions. I don't mean to pester :D

    I look forward to your next chapter!
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  • From sanda on April 08, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From Leentjef on April 08, 2008
    very very good keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From h2elena on April 07, 2008
    Lovely chapter lol. Oog gross medicine yuk. Nice to see sirius and remus together. My sev and tom certainly are hony teenagers. Tom sitting at his desk with severus practically laying all over him. Update soon please.
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  • From 4872luk on April 07, 2008
    I am LOVING this story! I have a bit of a thing for bad guys actually being misunderstood and being goodies really (as long as they also maintain some kind of baddie mistique/power and don't end up being wet!) No sogginess detected yet so all is good. I do like a bit of Dummbledore bashing too (cos when you think of what he did/ sat by and let happen when he was supposed to be all powerful...) so feel free to do some of that. Also any story where Sirius is still alive is OK by me. Then to cap it all off you have a Lucius/Harry pairing which is my all time favourite couple in existance (I can't even read Harry/Ginny anymore). I am in seventh heaven!!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From dominique1 on April 07, 2008
    thank you for updating soon i like this chapter a lot it has more detail about lily or should i say toms crew i hope that albus gets what coming to him more soon please
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  • From SexiBunny on April 07, 2008
    why must writers be so cruel and make us wait? this it great love it write more soon
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  • From bumblebee on April 07, 2008
    i like it! more! more!
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  • From Bastian on April 07, 2008
    Yay a new chapter! Yes, that did clear things up for me! Though I wonder if Tom is the dom and Sev is the sub...well with Harry being as powerful as he is supposed to be is it that the static issue only happens if the dom is that powerful? So if Luc is Harry's dom he wouldn't have had the problem with the static? Hmm, thats what I am thinking. Though I don't know if that was what you meant.

    There were a few mistakes as far as grammar and spelling that I noticed in this chapter. Such as made it...made it and instead of Remus it was Remeus. If you would like me to beta I would be happy to do so. If so my email is shinji.fukushima@yahoo.com. If not that is cool too, but thought I would offer my services since I would like to see this story blossom into everything it could be.

    Great chapter and I am looking forward to the next!
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  • From h2elena on April 06, 2008
    OK totally hooked your off to a really good start. Ooh love a veela lucius with his mate harry. I hope lucius and sev and tom are going to sort out the dursleys. Giggled at sev and tom two horney teenagers.More soon please.
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