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Reviews for Things Happen

By : lexi1498
  • From soldiersgirl0709 on April 18, 2008
    Hi, me again LOL....great premise, but a bit rushed...as a reader I like to be filled in on the "between" even if its just a snippet, otherwise the story feels like it has holes in it to me. I think you have great potential, but perhaps fleshing it out a little more would help. Great premise, great plot for a first fic too. Keep practicing and writing!

    happy writing
    SG
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 17, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From MB3 on April 15, 2008
    Not too bad for a first story. But for readers who do not care for OOC characters, it probably isn't the best. I admit to generally preferring stories where the characters stick pretty much to how JKR portrayed them, even if the storyline doesn't, but this was pretty good. Keep up the writing and the posting. If you ever want to write professionally I would suggest developing a deeper plot and characterizations, though. But I'm told once the first story has been posted, posting others becomes easier. So good job and I hope to see more from you in the future.
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  • From Sampdoria on April 12, 2008
    Thank you for a brilliant story, it has been great spending time with you:-))
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 12, 2008
    This was an excellent story. I loved how it ended with the sorting of their youngest child.
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  • From Tenar10r on April 12, 2008
    Wonderful!
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  • From shanarenea on April 11, 2008
    very cute. i enjoyed this story very much

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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on April 11, 2008
    I thought this was a very nice little fic that ended very sweetly. Well done.

    Red


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  • From Lauriurix on April 11, 2008
    aww that was such a nice story =)

    will you continue writing any other HG/SS story? =)
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  • From catysmom1028 on April 11, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Extraho on April 11, 2008
    surely you meant ' i am NOW proud..." right? love the story. it was sooo sweet.!
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 11, 2008
    Another great chapter. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From wicraven on April 11, 2008
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 11, 2008
    An excellent chapter. I thought it was sweet the way Alyson was with her baby brother. I am glad that Severus asked Hermione to marry him so that they could be a real family. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Lauriurix on April 11, 2008
    omgggg :D

    the baby is coming! =D
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