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Reviews for Tempus Fugit Praeterhăc

By : Lucie
  • From Jilliane on April 08, 2008

    Excellent. I cannot say this enough. Well written, long, satisfying chapters, an original storyline, and I like the subtle way in which you've given Severus and Harry's friends and neighbors characteristics of the people they know in their own timeline. I will admit that I found Severus to be a bit more harsh and uncaring than usual, particularly after he'd just told Harry he'd care for him and protect him and even let him hold his hand in thr marketplace, but then you balanced it out beautifully having Modia enlighten Severus and making him see the error of his ways. I particularly liked Severus' introspection as he sat in the courtyard pondering his treatment of Harry, and him ultimately admitting to himself he was wrong. This story is so captivating, I'm completely enthralled, and was so very happy to see not one new chapter as expected, but two. What a treat! I cannot wait for tomorrow's installment. Really, Bravo!
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  • From Extraho on April 08, 2008
    wow, i must remember to thank those killer rabbits from hell, because this story is fantastic!!!!
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  • From cravedom on April 08, 2008
    I must gush! This is a very promising start; so many things to be resolved and the hint of more to come. The promise of a chapter a day makes it even more exciting, it reminds me of when I was a little girl and my father used to bring me a candy every day from work. I will be eagerly waiting for today treat.
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  • From Jilliane on April 07, 2008

    Firstly, I have to say that my admiration knows no bounds for an author who spends 3 months researching and writing a fic. Bravo on that account! Needless to say, this is very well written, and what an intriguing storyline! Both Harry and Severus seem to be right in character, although I do think Severus is just a tad bit more harsh than usual. Still, that may be what is needed to keep Harry from dropping the ball. You say the story is all written and that you will be posting a chapter daily; I say good! because I'm not sure I can wait even that long for the next installment!! Well done!
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