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Reviews for A Most Trusted Soldier

By : Rettavex
  • From QueenB on October 01, 2009
    Ch. 12 I liked this analytical replay of events. Severus
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  • From QueenB on October 01, 2009
    Ch. 11 Ooh, this was SMOKING! I haven
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  • From QueenB on October 01, 2009
    Ch. 9 Well, I find this chapter to be quite passionate in its erotic and emotional tension. Undoubtedly, Harry is going to be trained in his role as dominant. But I
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  • From QueenB on October 01, 2009
    Ch. 8
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  • From ANON - laurapetri on August 03, 2009
    I love yur charaterisations of of everyone but in particular Harry, Snape and Luna. Excellent work that I enjoyed reading
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  • From ANON - Kai on July 02, 2009
    I have to say Even with the Heritage that Harry has this type of relationship angst is completely realistic. I myself am very non-confidant. This is more like a relationship that i would have. I am very strong willed and harsh on people sometimes but growing up with the parents I did and the occuraces and fights and lack of just simple love and caring find myself alot like Harry and Sev in someways.

    I'm not telling you this just to talk about myself but I have to let you know that your work is amazing. I have learn't something new about myself through this fic. That is rare because I'm not intelectual. I'm more grifindorish in most ways. I have a heart that I wear on my sleave but and i'm too kind most of the time, and I get hurt because of it. but I am also loyal to a fault and give people way to many chances.

    I'm just very honored that you shared your story and that I was able to learn something that is intergral about myself and that just makes me incredibly proud of someone that I have never met and never will. This is something I am hoping that you are proud of. Your story is very well put together, and I am urging you to think about writing your own story. Adding your own characters to this story. Developing characters from this. They are many different angles that you can make this out to be. Sev himself could have come from a broken abusive home or relationship and finds he is not comfortable in his own skin and meets harry. or what not.

    There is many avenues that you can take from this story and turn it into a novel. I would honestly be the first out there to buy it if you did. This is not just a talent or neish if you will. I can see a true love and knowledge in writing.

    Thank you for your story, the strength that you have allowed me to learn about myself and find within. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. This wasn't just your mind that you put into this lovely peice of lit, ut your heart and soul aswell.
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  • From Kalendral9 on May 21, 2009
    soooo good ^_^ gonna read sequel next, cheers K
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  • From blesseddarkness on May 05, 2009
    I loved your story!!! I read it all in one sitting and could not walk away!!! I send you tons of chocolate and marshmallows to feed you and your muse!!! As lovely and kinky as she is it is your hands that wrote the story that made me laugh and nearly cry at points!!! I will be happily reading the sequel next!!!
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  • From ANON - EvertoAngelus on April 05, 2009
    Wow. WOW. Is it okay if I just... Collapse before the awesomeness of this? 'Cause I really might do it. It's just... WOW.
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  • From MyaMalfoy on February 09, 2009
    OMG!!! I love this story!! I'm not one for D/s, usually, but this is great! I couldn't tear myself away from it until I'd read the whole thing, along with the first 5 chaps of "Never Too Much". I've even added you to my favs, and this is what I wrote:

    ""Author - Rettavex

    http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296834965 - Good author. "A Most Trusted Soldier" followed by "Never Too Much" which is a epilogue to "A Most Trusted Soldier". MTS is Snarry, with Sev as the sub, and really, given what his past was in the books, it really does make sense, and she even explains it, just so you understand. I'm not big into D/s, but this is a very well thought out and written story. The epilogue includes an addition to their bedroom, but by the time you're done with MTS, then you'll be rooting for it like I was!""

    I can't begin to explain how much I enjoyed this story. Thank you so much. I eagerly await other stories from you - I'm sure they will be as great as it's predecessors.
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  • From ANON - countesszero on February 07, 2009
    thank you for this long story.

    what disturbed me a bit were actually the political events, the actions undertaken by the ministry. i am not sure if that was intended by you but it seemed to me that in the end harry potter had no guilt in using his power to achieve his goals, very much like voldemort himself. although he did not desire the spotlight he did not have a problem abusing his power and influence. - i found the way how that was incorporated in the story a bit discomforting - as if corruption is a good thing. corruption is a reality of course and in a way it fits your plot, it just seemed a bit strange that neither harry nor snape, ron or hermione would mind or at least feel uneasy about the various actions the ministry or ron undertook to aid his friend.

    snape is hard to recognize since he seems to have grown into this eloquent yoga-person who is capable of accessing and expressing his feelings - he seems not himself. but maybe it is just me preferring him resentful and more dissonant. and you do mention though that his mean demeanor during the war was a facade he had to keep up as a spy. that makes sense and is a good explanation. in the end he IS more likable and sweet.

    also luna was disturbingly pulled together, actually a hermione in disguise, in this story even a better hermione than hermione herself.

    harry is much sexier - a tinge of darkness just suits him well.

    and choosing oliver wood as villain was a genius strike - not a slytherin but a fellow gryffindor. he seemed to be some sort of echo of james potter, also a gryffindor and a spoiled popular boy who took things too far. and eerily enough snape was james target and then ends up as woods victim as well, as if history repeats itself - both times unable to move and to intervene. i really admired that plot twist!

    hopefully my critique was not offending! i did enjoy your story a lot!
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  • From ANON - Sirin Black on December 12, 2008
    this fic was awesome, loved every word of it!
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  • From ANON - kiki on December 12, 2008
    I am absolutely in love with this fic, wel written and very nice.

    kudos to you
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  • From ANON - Sirin Black on December 10, 2008
    awesome start! can't wait to read the rest of the chapters!
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  • From InsaneSeaTurtle on October 09, 2008
    I love how Wood is the bad guy... It makes this fic so much better!

    OMG! HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE!! *dies*

    You're amazing.
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