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By : Rettavex
  • From InsaneSeaTurtle on October 02, 2008
    OMG! I luffs it!!! *huggles fic* Great job.
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  • From InsaneSeaTurtle on October 02, 2008
    OMG! Snape FAINTED!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUNNY AS HELL!!!!!!!!
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  • From Darkless on September 24, 2008
    Excellent! I'm sorry I didn't find this fic until now, I would have been a faithful reviewer. This definitely fed my angst-beast. Thank you for sharing your talent.
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  • From jddammann on September 19, 2008
    The idea, the writing, the ... I'm not sure what it was, but this is one of my all time favorite stories!!! The idea of adding to this story with a threesome (even a oneshot) does not appeal to me, it doesn't mean I won't read it, but it doesn't appeal. I love threesomes, and moresomes, just not with this particular story. They tried and fought so hard to have this relationship, that adding someone else is a little hard to take.

    Oh well, that is my choice, not yours. I would love to read a true threesome from you, from beginning to end!! Let us know when!!!!!!

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  • From QueenB on September 19, 2008
    Ch. 9 An excellent chapter, filled with tension and desire and the hint of things to come. I loved that kissing scene between Harry and Severus. A little tease for the readers never come amiss and heightens anticipation wonderfully. I also liked Harry giving his first order for Severus to be bathed. Hey, I wonder if that will be in the next chapter? I'm hoping so.
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  • From mywayornoway on September 18, 2008
    I so looked forward to coming on and finding this updated every few weeks. It is sad to see that it is at an end though all good things must come to an end with time.
    I would truely love to be added to your alert list. If you can not see my address it is sakadec1502@yahoo.com.
    Keep up the wonderful work.
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  • From Jan on September 18, 2008
    Love this story... but... never mind! I cant wait to for your one shot sequel! ^_~

    Jan


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  • From MasterofPie on September 18, 2008
    haha that was an amazing fic! So sad to see it come to an end, there are very few Harry/Sev pairings - aka. Harry being the dominate one. But it was great to read! Thank you for sharing and better yet, finishing this fic!
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  • From QueenB on September 18, 2008
    Ch. 5 I have to admit I was nervous when Snape insisted on being in the room alone with Ron. He had attempted to bait Harry into revealing something in the previous chapter. That failed but he was able to goad Ron. Still, both Gryffindors surprised him by not telling him what he needed to know.

    Hermione points out here what is Severus's major flaw with people in general and Harry in particular. He places so much emphasis on book learning he doesn't understand people at all. He's led such an insular life he can only peg people into categories and relate to them as such: Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Hufflepuff. His first reaction is to think the worst of people--their thoughts, actions, motives--and this causes him to underestimate them in certain cases.

    Like most intellectuals, he thinks he knows best and everyone around him is a blithering idiot. Someone once said that the mistakes of intelligent people do a lot more damage than the mistakes of stupid people because they are so unexpected. Severus's mistakes have been doozies and Harry's have been nothing by comparison.

    I hope Hermione has a good laugh at his expense when he comes to.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on September 17, 2008
    What an awesome ending to a WONDERFUL story. Your writing is unreal my dear. I'm still trying to figure out how you do what you do. The way you depict the power dynamics and sensuality and INTIMACY between Sev and Harry is just powerful and beautiful. I really really enjoyed every bit of this and I though that the ending was fitting, but it does leave me wanting more. I found myself laughing through out, and I think it's incredible you managed to insert humor into such a complex and intense D/s fic. You have the sub's needs spot on, and strangely, you still manage to keep Sev very IC....I LOVE your Harry as I've already told you. Really compelling and convincing story and my first creature!fic. Makes me want to check out some others. And, I'm so excited you have a sequel planned! I hope you get someone to do a banner for you, you definitely deserve one....thanks for writing this Rettavex....really awesome work and Congratulations for reaching the end.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on September 17, 2008
    Great ending I love it. This story is just truly great, this is the first time I have read and fell in love with a story where Severus is bottom. I usually like him on top but yout story made me think otherwise.

    I am truly looking forward to the thigns you have planned for this story
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  • From ANON - Aoikitsune on September 17, 2008
    it's done really?? wow i love this fic i would always have my laptop
    nearby to c if there was an update. so i just want 2 say congrats n
    hope to c a new story from u soon. also i tried addin my email 2 da
    livejournal link, but it wont except anonymous comment so i leave my
    email here. so yea ok best of luck. urs AoiKitsune =^-^=
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 17, 2008
    AWESOME story! One of the best Snarry out there!
    Loved the ending!
    Can't wait for the epilogue!
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  • From ANON - Chiaki Dark on September 16, 2008
    OMG. Oh, please.... Please let there be a "happy" ending.
    I'm still loving this fic-it's one of the best bottom!Snape fics out there and again... really hoping for the happy ending because that last bit just threw my heart to the floor.
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  • From tana97 on September 15, 2008
    Come on, dont give up you can do this. You are going to finish this great Fanfic that you started. And you are going to feel so proud when you do. More please. Soon Please.
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