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By : Rettavex
  • From ANON - kunitsu on August 27, 2008
    Wow what a wonmderful reunion between those two. I like how you made Severus describe Harrys cock, it made me smile. I love it when Madam Pomfrey can still scold them like children so cute
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  • From ANON - Nanashi on August 26, 2008
    :::Sets a Trap for the escaped Muse. Places the Muse's Fav. Treat in the middle to lorn her in::: Yes one or even a couple more Chapters will do very nicely.. Yes I love this story and I really hate to see it end. But as they say All Good Things Come To An End..::keeps an eye out for the escaped Muse:::
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  • From dawnangel on August 26, 2008
    We still need to know if Severus will have enough power to birth Harry's child. I really enjoyed this story. really well written too.

    thanks
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on August 26, 2008
    I pretty much squeed when you updated! Their intimacy is off the chain, and you write it so well. Loved the bath scene, that was really romantic and sweet and HOT. Nice to see them still connecting even if they can't really "connect" lol. And how funny was it that Madam Pomfrey caught them, tee hee. So he had everyone oblivated eh? hmmm. I hope there are no loose ends to tie up. I'm so glad this isn't the real last chapter....keep going!
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  • From doomprincess on August 26, 2008
    The cavetroll was super excited to be acknowledged. I enjoyed the chapter. enjoy the characters you are crafting and detailing. Thanks for sharing even if we did have to threaten the muse a little to get it. We'll be waiting. ;)
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  • From ANON - anon on August 26, 2008
    Yes, at least one more chapter. This one was lovely.
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  • From munesanzun on August 26, 2008
    *dies* YOU CAN'T DO THAT!!! XD No with holding of the final chapter... I love this story!! I hope Sev's okay in the end... Even if it takes some time... Snarry is the way it should be... And Sev would be heartbroken if Luna had to bare Harry's kids... Even if he did give permission. I hope it all ends well (Sniffles at their greeting BTW) more please!
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  • From dawnangel on August 26, 2008
    I just read though this entire fic and loved it. Please I want to know what happens, and if they ever have their children or not.

    Thanks for writing.


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  • From ANON - ila on August 24, 2008
    Noooooooooooooooooo!
    You can't do that!
    I'll die if i don't read the next chapter soon.
    You are a genius, an superb writer! Please please please
    the next chapter must be posted as soon as possible.

    Now, I liked chapter 23. and i hope that in the next chapter, harry will erase all of severus' doubts about being the perfect mate for harry.

    Maybe they could marry or get formaly bonded. so that severus will know that harry has no intention whatsoever of mating with someone else.

    anyway, once again you are a very good writer. I'm hooked on to your stories.
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  • From Narius on August 24, 2008
    It's official. You are some kind of fucking GOD!!! I love this story. Was there any particular influence in the scene of Wood's death? It was like Vlad Dracul meets Willow from BTVS. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From doomprincess on August 22, 2008
    Brings out cave troll with orders to harm, kidnap and "lose" the muse, if chapter is with held. That would be very not nice, since leaving us with finally a glimps of Harry but no knowledge of what he has been going through is just mean. Excellent update, poor Snape. Thanks for sharing. (Cave troll holds club threateningly) ;)
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  • From KaeXLi on August 22, 2008
    please do not hold the next chapter. see im reviewing! la la la i love this fic update soom lala la
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  • From ANON - Phoenix on August 22, 2008
    Excuse me while I take several deep breaths .... I have to say, I absolutely love this story, although the cliffhangers you leave each chapter on is killing. Please, please, please, please, PLEASE! don't hold the next chapter hostage, I've been waiting several chapters to see my favourite two boys together, and how Severus recovers his magic ... because I know you can't really be thinking about ending this story on anything but a happy ending ... but there is a part of me that wonders....
    Ok, I'm definitely babbling here, so please put me out of my misery and don't hold the next chapter hostage ... please???
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  • From Selera on August 22, 2008
    NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO! Need it need it need it! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - anon on August 22, 2008
    Maybe the confusion is because chapter 21 says: "Luna, being a formal lover --" Must be a typo then, but a confusing one.
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