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Reviews for Bonds of Affection

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 13, 2008
    LOVE Eddie Vedder : ) I knew you were cool...lol. and YES you brought Snape back...This whole Luna as a part of his mind is fascinating..and I'm wondering why Luna..are you gonna ever reveal that? I love it whenever she's talking..it's so haunting and beautiful and we know it's key to the story in some way...the riddles she drops are spell binding...so glad Hermione's in his corner...LOL@Ron asking if he wanted Lucius dead like it was working a Mandrake...I hope this tranfiguration thing works..and thank god the bond between Sev. and Voldy is broken...that offers a lot of hope in itself....
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2008
    You are simply eeeevil!!! Leaving us all hanging right there! "and he uttered the spell..." Gah!!! you must finish! I demand it! and if you do i shall send you lots and lots of cookies!! Here take one *gives a chocolate chip cookie* it's yummy and I have more!! So please please please finish!!
    ~ Waits impatiently
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  • From ANON - MistressofDisaster on May 13, 2008
    Oh such a mean Cliffie!!!
    I love how the story progresses and I would never have imagined the two using muggle technology!
    It seems you've planned the story in detail I like that!
    Keep on writing!
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  • From munchkin on May 12, 2008
    AHHHHH!!! i can't wait for more! this is a great story. keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 12, 2008
    Evil cliffhanger!
    Great chapter though. Severus has endured so much... to put it lightly.
    update!
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  • From soloflamelady on May 12, 2008
    oh all the excitement yes this is so good I love the gps tracking it cracked me up. Harry lojack lol. So where is our dear Severus hopefully it is someplace of answers. update soon please
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  • From spikesbitch on May 12, 2008
    please don't let snape die. please!!!!
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  • From Selera on May 12, 2008
    OMG! This is amazing!
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 11, 2008
    Wait...as happy as I am that there's hope...how did that happen? Why didn't the AK kill him? I'm glad Lucius will never use his wand again....I hope he wakes up in a coffin somewhere in the middle of nowhere..lol. I'm worried about Harry using this spell....it had bad consequences before...there's something you're not telling us...as usual...lol. Update soon!
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  • From katecooley on May 11, 2008
    DAGNABIT! That jerk! Malfoy and Voldemort both! There's a mighty beating on the way for them, isn't there.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 11, 2008
    YOU CANNOT KILL SEVERUS...you heard? lol. I know this can't be permanent...or real...so I'm not gonna get upset : ) no no no. : )


    I love your Lucius BTW, he's so damn amoral, evil, and intriguing...almost a scene stealer. That being said, I hope he dies a horrible death at the end. I did love his line to Severus about being in hell and a blizzard coming his way. OUCH!!


    OK, now bring Severus back.....
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  • From ANON - xaraxn on May 11, 2008
    ah yet another beautiful cliffie
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  • From emilywaters on May 11, 2008
    Thank you! Another reader already advised me re: driving regulations, so I will fix that age problem shortly. As for GPS, I wondered aobut that too, so I consulted some sources, and it appears that this type of technology was already available in mid 90's, (in fact the technology was there already in mid 80's although in more primitive form), but I assumed it was a lot more expensive than it is now, so it would require the sale of a car (and possibly Hermione posing as a conservationist ... or just flashing a big wad of money :) )

    Thank you so much again!
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 11, 2008
    First of all, GPS tracking? Bloody brilliant you are! Second of all, where the hell are they going? And do Hermione and Ron have to go with him...I have a bad feeling about this....
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  • From ANON - Aragon on May 11, 2008
    I'm enjoying your tale very much! And am in awe of your incredible update-speed!

    However in this chapter you might remember that Harry Potter is NOT playing out in America. Hermione wouldn't be allowed to drive a car at age 16 in Great Britain (as in the rest of Europe too btw), nor would parents make such a gift at that age. The minimum age for obtaining a driving license is 17 in the United Kingdom!
    So you might want to change the age for Hermione's birthday gift: which should be easy since Hermione is nearly a year older than Harry and was 12 years old already 3 weeks into her first year. She thus came of age near the beginning of their 6th year (September 19th)!

    I also have a hard time seeing a civilian GPS device in the form you described being available in 1997... A surprisingly large number of authors seem to forget the canon timeline in which HP plays out and the availability (or lack of!) of certain technologies compared to now. But I'm willing to suspend my disbelieve there :-) After all it's not as if you gave teen!Severus an MP3-player or mobile phone in 1978... which I've seen done.
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