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Reviews for Bonds of Affection

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - Bones on May 06, 2008
    Love this story, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 06, 2008
    Awww damn. This is so freaking sad. I hope Snape doesn't have to hurt Harry...they are really ready for the worst though. I can't imagine what Snape must be feeling. I'm so dreading the next few chapters...but I'm definitely here for the long run....
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  • From servantofall36 on May 05, 2008
    I really must say that I am truly enjoying this story. It is so achingly beautiful at times ... depthy and lovely, really. I love your characterisations. Harry is exactly as I would imagine him in such a situation. I am sure he carries great insecurity. How could he not, as he was raised by wolves ... hateful woves, at that. Snape is, shall we say, Himself. But, I see him in this story as he would be when falling in love. (We saw his capacity for love in the memories in DH. It broke him, confirming my theory that the power of love is a very serious thing.)

    I think you handle the slavery issue quite well. The scenes in which Harry submits are neither trite nor gratuitous. You take the issue quite seriously, and you weave it into a story that is both believable and compelling ... yes, that is the word ... compelling. I can really see a relationship like this as valid and full of potential. I am saying this badly, I suppose. But, I am just that touched.

    Thank you for writing this story. I look forward to the rest of it ... anxiously.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 05, 2008
    This chapter made me smile and at times laugh. LOL@Snape's insistence that Harry convince him to keep the tongue piercing. Harry with a pierced tongue sounds so hot. Ron and Hermione are kickass in this story..and I'm glad Harry has them. I love how natural Harry and Snape seem to fit...that's hard to do missy IMO. Too bad it's drawing to an end..but maybe not a true end hmm?
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 05, 2008
    Only 2 more chapters till ole Voldie appears? Ack!
    Great chapter!
    update!
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  • From ANON - LadyNightVamp on May 05, 2008
    I really have to say this, I love the way you write. I have read your other stories with Harry and Draco and truly enjoyed them. I just happen to find this one and I have enjoyed every minute of reading.
    LadyNightVamp
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  • From soloflamelady on May 05, 2008
    i love their relationship in and out of the bond. now that we've gotten the hint from luna I am going back to read the and see which word were missed. great work update more soon.
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  • From katecooley on May 05, 2008
    I like the "hang onto your hats" part! HEE HEE! I can't begin to imagine what they're gonna wreak on his withered ass. WHOOOO!
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  • From cravedom on May 05, 2008
    This Mione and Ron really are wonderful friends, they are thoughful and would be just the kind of people to have around if one was dying. Of course that will not happen because you are fixing that for us; right? I am starting to have that "going to the dentist" feeling, afraid of the pain that I know is coming but wanting to hurry and do it so I can feel better.
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  • From emilywaters on May 05, 2008
    Response to Jilliane's question:

    1)When Ron is asking the question, he wants to know what Harry is feeling - what are the feelings that urged him to agree to the brand.

    2) Harry's response is confusing and ambiguous, and at this point it is meant to be. So... they all know that voldemort's potion creates an imperceptible bond that feels like it's genuinely a part of the person. it should be impossible to tell the difference between the bond's urges and one's own feelings. Hermione wonders whether Harry might have been a true submissive, even before the slave-bond, but Harry says no. he believes he could have never had truly submissive feelings for anyone else - just for Severus.

    The rest is mean to be ambiguous, however this conversation is meant to be important...

    3) The brand isn't a plot device. It's just a symbol of ownership that's all. ironically, it's probably the only thing that isn't a plot device... ; )
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  • From ANON - Bones on May 05, 2008
    Love this story. well written
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 05, 2008
    Review for chapters 41 & 42

    Wow everything seems so sureal. It's like Harry isnt going to die when he turns 17, your writing makes one forget about that unless you reminded them of it at the end of those chapters, hell I really did forget about that part. As I said before I love how you can make Severus's and Harry's love making be both very erotic and sweet. And Rons reactions to hearing what Harry and Severus might be doing is so funny.

    Keep up the wonderful work
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  • From ANON - Bones on May 05, 2008
    Love the story. especiously the tombstone.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 04, 2008
    I'm glad that they got some time together, that was much needed for all of them. That brand is interesting..I wonder if it will be related to the solution to this mess? I know you hardly ever introduce anything random...Ron took all of that very well I must say, he's really grown up a bit in this fic. Poor Hermione, the guilt, but really there weren't any options other than to let Severus die, and then Harry wouldn't have known the happiness he does now, however fleeting.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 04, 2008
    That metaphor with the sunlight was really beautiful.
    Great chapter!
    update!
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