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Reviews for Bonds of Affection

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 04, 2008
    Loved the line: "If you ever want to see sunlight again" coming from Luna. I like that she's speaking to Severus in his dreams, giving him hints. I hope he picks up something useful from those hints...I'm getting a bit worried about the pending death of Harry...seems almost inevitable..unless he will be reborn like in DH? Loved Severus giving Harry power during sex and his explanation for it makes perfect sense. You just want them to be left alone and to enjoy each other...why can't Voldy do that? lol. I know he's coming for him soon...::sigh::
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 04, 2008
    Awesome chapter!
    update!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 04, 2008
    That was just WOW. It was amazingly erotic and sweet, a rare combination for me to see. I just loved how Harry and Severus completely abandoned themselves to the slave/master role but still in a loving relationship.
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  • From Selera on May 04, 2008
    Umm may I say wow? This is getting intense.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 04, 2008
    Sweet. so sweet. excellent work hun.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 03, 2008
    That was so deep....Harry's love has changed Severus' view of ownership...and has turned a sadist into a loving dominant. Not that they can't be, but as far as Severus is concerned, I'm sure they weren't the same before Harry. Your use of description puts us right there with Harry, the doubt, the anticipation, the terror, the longing....you're so damn good at this. Once they get through whatever hell is coming, please please return back to the Chamber : )
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  • From MistyMossflower on May 03, 2008
    Great chapter, I especially liked the very end where Severus told Harry that he has known ownership & love but never together until now. ^_^ Great work, I can't wait for more!!
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  • From brooklynite18 on May 02, 2008
    great story
    i'm happy i found it
    having a seizure in my seat, excited about what will happen next. lol.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 01, 2008
    Whoa! I was not expecting that! Beyond the fact that Severus (see you got me calling him Severus now) has a dungeon in his basement (HOT!), for Harry to ask him to lead him to it and to tell him he wanted to know him completely and give him everything he wanted was so intimate in itself. the slave bond is in full effect but I'm not completely convinced that it was even needed to get Harry to this point. The whole collaring scene was so well done! I've never read a real collaring in fan fiction and you really capture the depth of what it means to both of them...it's not flippant, it's like this is who I am, and I'm offering to you and the anguish and reluctant acceptance of Harry's total submission was so great...we see that Severus really does take owning him seriously, that he's really in love and how much he really regrets what he did and how it changes how he views himself as a Master. You've giving this Master/slave relationship really great complexity that you don't see in most bdsm fan fics. Awesome awesome chapter...can't wait to see where they go from here...
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 01, 2008
    ARGH!!!
    The most evil place to leave off at! Humph, the bond is at full force, non?
    Great chapter
    update!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 01, 2008
    Wow chapter 39 was just WOW. I dont know if its the potions doing that to Harry or Harry just wanting it because of Severur or maybe it's both but what Harry did was truly intense/ I just loved how Severus is slowly losing control of his desire to dominate but this have control on what he does to Harry

    Your writing seems to have changed in the past few chapters, it just became more pronounced in this latest one. It's not bad or anything, your writing just changed tone but it did give a nice effect to this current chapter
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 01, 2008
    Chapter 38 review

    Wow that was one hell of a hot session. I never knew one could be caned bccause of wallowing in self pity and pushing your friends away, I really find it sweet that Severus made Harry realize that he should not do that
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  • From alleycat88 on May 01, 2008
    Excellent chapter. thank you.
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  • From magentah on May 01, 2008
    I want more! Heh. It will be a sad day when this story ends (plz, hopefully HAPPILY) because I feel like I can never get enough of it. Constant refreshing to see if it has been updated .. really just means I should get a life. :D This chapter was brilliant, and well needed (for all of us, I think) after so much sadness.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 30, 2008
    Emily...LOVED this caning scene, I can read it over and over....the chapter is cut off though at the end...may need to be reposted...please do...it's HOT
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