Click Here!

Reviews for Bonds of Affection

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - kunitsu on April 21, 2008
    Wow very nice updates and those smut scenes between Harry and Severus were hot. it ammused me greatly how Dumbledore reacted to that two.
    Report Review

  • From chantalmalfoy on April 21, 2008
    Wow!!! The sex scene was amazing!!! So passionate. So hot. So emotional. Everything I could have hoped it would be without even realizing that was what would be perfect! :) And the Dumbledore scene was great! LOL! And I know that Severus' smell and the reason he goes through the slave pain is because of something that happened involving him and the day the Potters died but other than him being there and helping Voldemort, I can't figure out the personal signifigance for him. But I am sure (after a LONG time) we will find that out. :)
    Report Review

  • From soloflamelady on April 21, 2008
    Ohh this is just to good Harry is slowly but surely becoming rather submissive I can't wait to read more and do find out about the wailing willow thing. Update soon please
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on April 21, 2008
    Harry is sooo wrong for that..lol. Nah, serves Dumbledork right : ) He is a manipulative bastard and Harry made some really good observations about the ease at which he acquired the potion. He's bold though, doing what he did in front of the Headmaster and McGonnagall..lol. LOVED the hair braiding into the rope trick, you'd be a awesome Domme, so creative : ) I hope their happiness lasts, I know something bad is coming though...
    Report Review

  • From lonelyreverance on April 20, 2008
    oh my god!!!!! and the last line in chapter twenty did so much for me... october is my favorite month and i always loved the smell that time of year, it made this whole story so much more personal, despite the overtones of snapes wrong doing
    Report Review

  • From MissMiki on April 20, 2008
    Strangely enough I LOVE the smell of fall... Like, it's probably one of my favorite "seasonal" smells right after the smell of blooming Westeria. :) LOVED these chapters!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Bones on April 20, 2008
    Very good. really like this story
    Report Review

  • From ANON - qwerty on April 20, 2008
    Odd ending. Now I'm very more intrigued about Severus' past.
    update!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aiwendil on April 20, 2008
    "You smell like October." ...I like that.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Eve on April 20, 2008
    So good, Emily! Can't wait for more.
    Report Review

  • From katecooley on April 20, 2008
    Sev's secret must be a doozy...

    More great chapters!
    Report Review

  • From KarenLioncourt on April 20, 2008
    Wow, talk about being attuned to the Master's wishes. Way to go Harry!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on April 20, 2008
    That was quite lovely Emily. ::sigh::: Harry's first time and he did it the way he did to please Snape, he's been studying him close enough to know that that would make his day and that he let himself be taken like that is really...I don't know. That was just really intense the way you wrote it, I like that Harry wanted to see his face and looked up at him during the act. Now I'm wondering what Snape is hiding, is it the secret we all know from canon or something darker? And why does he eternally smell like October? I wonder how they will interact now that they've crossed this barrier...great chapter!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on April 20, 2008
    LOL@ Harry's last line about Umbridge's office! You're so funny...Interesting idea that a book can be cursed with dark magic to oblivate the reader....I wonder where Ron found the information about the Willow and now I'm dying to know what the hell this ingredient does...I hope it doesn't pose any danger to Harry, but it must be bad for it to be so obscure and protected.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on April 20, 2008
    @Ch.18. Cool spell, glad to see Harry still has some measure of power, and he's keeping Snape on his toes. Also very cool that Snape understands that the normal punishments will not work on Harry because of the abuse/neglect he suffered. It's rare you see this type of insight from a top in a fic where Harry is the bottom..as usual, you're showing your keen ability to use a character's background and characteristics to create a deeper relationship between characters that could interact in predictable ways, but you never let that happen. Can't wait what Snape's lastest insight will produce.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!