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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on June 20, 2008
    about #15...

    *inhales deeply and exhales..* Ahh, there's NOTHING more refreshing than seeing
    Draco's Slytherin side come out to 'play'. Of course, the Ravenclaw-in-disguise,
    Hermione, did a pretty good job, too.

    You know, you ought to let Draco flex his muscles more, I would think he'd
    enjoy it.
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  • From alleycat88 on June 17, 2008
    Ah! Yes she was good wasn't she! I was a little worried there! And aren't they clever! ^.^ Heehee! What a twist! Hey all's fair in love and war right? And in this case its so true! Thanks for updating! I can't wait to see what happens to Diggory now!
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  • From Mangacat on June 17, 2008
    Closing in indeed... hilarious how the interview playing out, the poor Auror was so non-plussed, he didn't even think to act. And I have the feeling that his own righteousness will let him stumble over his own feet all the way to Harry's trial.
    Also the situation with Diggory, that's going to be so entertaining when the recording gets to go into the right hands *g* I hope he chokes on his own spit. Can't wait for the Prophet!!
    Cat
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  • From Christabell on June 16, 2008
    What a terrible way to end a chapter... Rita Skeeter actually seems to be on Harry's side for once and then you just stop?? Haha, I love it.
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  • From alleycat88 on June 15, 2008
    Oh man not that skank again! Grrr....Someone seriously needs to ....I dont know kill her very slowly... :D Thanks for updating!
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  • From Mangacat on June 15, 2008
    Well, well, well.. I'm sure when we see the damage they're going to do to Lucius; it will be great (in every sence of the word...) But having Rita Skeeter once again on Harry's side for whatever reason is just hilarious!! I can't wait for the Aurors to react to that one!! My... I love it!!
    Cat
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  • From Yume111 on June 14, 2008

    I like how the relationship between Hermione and Draco has apparently developped further without Harry present, it stands on its own two feet now, so to speak.

    The long-term effects of that spell sound interesting. It looks like Harry will have to live through bouts of what he used to fear about himself, and maybe still does to a certain extent? Sounds like a test, in a way.

    Mordant indeed. I love all those names. This lady sounds less dangerous than her name though.

    I love how you bring out Hermione, the scholar who will wonder about gooseberries when her best friend
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  • From alleycat88 on June 13, 2008
    Go Draco! woot! That was just awesome! I can only hope that Draco can make Harry see that he loves him and is more devoted to him than to his parents. I just love Harry! He is so infuritatingly good! Even Hermione was a little frustrated with him. Haha! Thanks for updating!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 11, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 14!!!
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  • From AMODonnell on June 11, 2008
    Now that I've finally caught up with your AFF.net stories, I'm afraid I have a confession to make:

    I've stopped reading "Changing of the Guard". I loved the premise, and I like your treatment of both Draco and Harry (along with most of the supporting characters), but the model of politics you were using just got distracting for someone who's been involved with subversive political action (including but not limited to the queer-liberation movement) for a number of years -- it just wasn't quite believable.

    With the "A Potion Named Desire"/"An Alchemical Discontent"/"A More Worldly Man" series, it feels like you're playing more to your strengths. I still stumble over the occasional misused word or odd turn of phrase, but I know that in fanfiction you don't quite have the benefit of an editorial staff. Do you have original work on the same scale? It seems like it would be an easy transition for you. (On the other hand, I do love your H/D stuff...so don't stop!)
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  • From Mangacat on June 11, 2008
    Sheesh... that's going to put a dumper on the Malfoys.. don't even want to know what devious scheme Millicent and Hermione will cook up together, but it's going to be earthquaking for sure. Ahhhh.. what truely allencompassing drama...
    Cat
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  • From Yume111 on June 09, 2008
    Another really great chapter.

    Harry
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  • From alleycat88 on June 08, 2008
    HAH! Failure! :P good try Malfoy's but Harry's love was stronger! ^,^ But Harry did try didn't he...to make it work between Draco and his parents. That was sweet of him...despite the fact that she nearly broke him! Thanks for updating! this chapter was so tense I was at the edge of my seat!! I was like nooooo Harry don't give in! Then I was like Hurry up Draco!!! So yeah...intense stuff...!
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  • From avihenda on June 08, 2008
    great chapter :-)
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  • From Dezra on June 08, 2008
    I left my computer and internet for almost 3 months and came back to this great story. I hope that Narcissa gets what's coming to her. it's now 2 in the morning because I couldn't stop reading. Another great story. I get so caught up in your stories. I hope that Harry gets out of this mess intact. Will that man's testimony work?
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