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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Mangacat on June 08, 2008
    Holy crap.. I was just about going to die from the tension seeping out around the scenes with Draco until that fricking Auror finally made his much overdue appearence. I knew Harry would only get out of it with help and DAMN is Narcissa going to be in trouble.. I think that stunt really cost them the charges against Harry.. aside from costing them Draco in many more ways than one.. but he wouldn't have come back anyway, what I really pity is her inability to understand his motives or she would have realized it long ago...
    Cat
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  • From gentlenightrain on June 08, 2008
    Awwwww...
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  • From Yume111 on June 03, 2008
    Great chapter again.
    This sounds very interesting, this new development with Littlesmith.

    And I love those three together, they have quite a lot of chemistry going between them.
    I
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 03, 2008
    about #11...

    I'm going to assume you ARE going to tell us what 'Duco aeternum' means in
    the next chapter.

    Also, loved the mind games that was played here.
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  • From avihenda on June 02, 2008
    great chapter. cant waith to see where this is going!
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  • From survivalinstinct on June 02, 2008
    holy fucking hell. I think I should wait until you post a few more chapters before reading again. THE SUSPENSE D:
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  • From Mangacat on June 02, 2008
    Oh dear... as I can translate the spell quite nicely I have an idea what Narcissa plans to do with it, I'm just not sure what complications will come of it, especially since we're talking about Harry here.. sure he won't be able to throw it of right away, but I don't her plan will come to pass even remotely the way she wants it to. At the very least, even if they get Harry away from Draco he'll for one get suspicious and then won't come back to his parents either way. Nice try though!!
    Cat
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  • From alleycat88 on June 01, 2008
    Hermione sure knows how to use what she has to get what she wants. But what did Narcissa do to Harry?! I just knew that whole no one is allowed in wasn't going to work *rolls eyes* Nice chapter. I hope one day that the Malfoy's will understand the error of their ways...but I doubt it.
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  • From Yume111 on May 31, 2008
    So for the next twist..
    Poor guys, don
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  • From Mangacat on May 31, 2008
    Oh my.. I knew the clean up after Daphne was going way to smoothly even with the memories and Malfoys for it to be over.. but I didn't even fanthom they want to reclassify Harry. Well, problem is, even if he wins the trial, there is still the news out in the open which could cause considerable problems. Let's see how the dream team deals with it. Just a pity that you deprived Harry of the MilliMione-Meeting!!
    Cat
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 31, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 11! Will the whole story come out now? Will Harry lose his wand? What happens now?
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  • From avihenda on May 30, 2008
    Yay, another chapter! This new law about magical beings makes me wonder where/how harry got the ability in the first place. hmmm... loved the chapter.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 30, 2008
    about #10...

    I was wondering how long it would be before Hermione got back into the mix. Even
    though I would have preferred that just Draco & Hermione work together, after
    all, with Draco's cunning and Hermione's knowledge, they would be a force to be
    reckoned with. Besides what can Millicent bring to the game?
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  • From ANON - Graballz on May 30, 2008
    I love this story! I find it really ironic that in both of your major WIPs (this one and "Guard") Draco is at odds with his parents, and yet, both have completely separate context, dialogue, emotions, feelings, etc. Amazing! Just another testament to what an AWESOME writer you are! Keep it up!
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  • From alleycat88 on May 30, 2008
    Oh no! The Malfoy's have definitely gone too far! I wonder how Draco Hermione and Millicent will handle this!? I cant wait for the next update! Btw....that scene was both too cute and entirely sexy! Cant wait for more of those!
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