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Reviews for A More Worldly Man

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From avihenda on May 21, 2008
    loved it. ^_^
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  • From Yume111 on May 19, 2008
    Oh I forgot to ask:
    is the moment I mentioned above, when Draco stares at Harry, the moment Draco has the idea for the potion?
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  • From Yume111 on May 19, 2008
    #6
    Thanks for the fast update!

    What was that moment when Harry talked about being open, and Draco stared at him? Did he not agree? Or did it make him think of something?

    Now that was interesting, Millicent that is.
    Somehow you have managed to retain the horrible caricature girl from canon and still present her as an interesting and potentially likable character.
    She sounds dangerous though, so I
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  • From Yume111 on May 19, 2008
    #5
    Way to go, both of them, but especially Draco. That felt really really satisfying. Fun and efficient as careful scheming might be, the direct approach does have a refreshing appeal. I could actually feel myself eggin him on, yes, show him, show them.
    I was feeling really proud of him, tactics be damned.

    His strong reaction does show, though, how deeply hurt he must be, to be so stubbornly misunderstood and disregarded by the people who should know better and who should be supportive.
    On the other hand declaring his point of view so unmistakably will probably help him see things clearer as well.

    Do you think it was also Harry
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  • From avihenda on May 18, 2008
    yay! fast update! thanks!
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  • From Mangacat on May 18, 2008
    Now, that's an interesting prospect, Draco and Harry sorting out each others messes.. I wonder how that one will go out, I've got the feeling we'll be impressed.. I like Millicent, she though and kind of cute. Do keep her, yeah??
    Cat
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 18, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 7!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 16, 2008
    about #5...

    Ooo...things are starting to take a turn towards ????...

    The thing that amazes me about your stories is not only do they have different
    themes, but how based on intrigue they are.

    While others FEEL like they are part of the Potter universe, yours are
    just...novelistic {yes I made that up} and they stand in a catergory by
    themselves.

    I'm trying hard to describe how it feels to read your story, which is in a good
    way, mind you. Also, there are times I feel I don't have to review all
    the time, because when I read certain chapters, they feel more like fillers or
    for information purpose only.

    Unlike other people stories that have SOMETHING going on all the time and it makes
    you review, you just simply tell a story.

    Am I making sense? Because saying this over the internet is harder than talking
    in person.

    Bottom line is...no matter what I'm trying to say, you do damn good work.

    nuff said...
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  • From avihenda on May 15, 2008
    wohooo! new chapter! :)
    great read!
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  • From Mangacat on May 15, 2008
    Aiiii... my was that a feast... I really, really liked to see certain persons told off... more of that!!!
    Cat
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 15, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 6! Things went bad but there was a spark of good. Right?
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  • From survivalinstinct on May 15, 2008
    Another great chapter. :]
    I'm glad Draco's finally decided to 'fight back' the way he has. Frankly, I was beginning to get sick of all the mind games and manipulation they were forced to do/deal with. Lucius, Narcissa & Diggory are such pompous ASSHOLES. God, they are just so frustrating I would be ringing their necks before I could finish a conversation with them.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 15, 2008
    A new ally? Interesting....I cant wait for more!
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  • From Yume111 on May 14, 2008
    I
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  • From survivalinstinct on May 14, 2008
    wait wait wait. As I understood it, they're showing the memories of Harry eating Daphne's magic and not of Draco's torture yeah? I can understand how the former would work in their favour but what good would it do to show what happened to their son...?
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