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Reviews for A More Worldly Man

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From survivalinstinct on May 14, 2008
    oh holy sh*t. You, my dear, are a master at cliffhangers. Lucius and Narcissa are terrible! Thankfully Draco has Harry now...
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter as usual :]
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  • From ANON - MisstressNicole on May 09, 2008
    I know you have to hear me screaming. The wails of 'Nooooooo' are echoing off the walls here. For two reasons. One that was the worse cliffy you've left us so far. Two, becuase I can't believe they would do that to their own son. What the hell! I'd always had more faith in them then that. Well, in Narcissa atleast. Nooooooooo. I'd been two chapters behind in this story and when I got to the end of the chapter for 'The Malfoy's Party' I couldn't wait to click 'next chapter' only to find that I was shit out of luck. How will Draco react to having his torture aired for all to see? Noooooooooo. I want to huggle him soo much.... NOoooooooooo. HOw witll the other company react to seeing what Harry can do?! How will Harry react seeing how they react? Noooooooooooo. Ahhhhhhh. I can't believe you did this to me. I'm so confused and baffled. I want to know what happens but I don't want to know in case it's bad. But I know now that I'll be checking for an update everyday. Damn it. I hate cliff hangers. Especially one of this capacity.

    Nikki
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  • From SParker on May 08, 2008
    about #4...

    Wow, I can honestly say I wouldn't have been able to keep up with the Malfoys, the
    way they duel with words.

    But, I see it's REALLY about to get nasty now, where does Lucious[sp?] get off
    showing that? If it was me, I'd go for broke & damn the intelligent head games, I'd SHOW you how I feel.

    By the way, this story has a political intrigue theme to it. Is that what you're
    going for now? Very Tom Clancyish...
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  • From ANON - raven on May 08, 2008
    OH MY GOD!!
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  • From Mangacat on May 08, 2008
    Ah, crap, this is a mean game.. in a million years I wouldn't have thought that they could take that measure, even if it's particularly obvious. You still manage to surprise me, it's marvelous. And I like swimming on the waves you create *g* I wonder how the public will react to the entire scene and what Harry will do... hmmm, precarious!!
    Cat
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  • From avihenda on May 07, 2008
    ok, dracos parents are idiots for showing the memories to everyone. I totally understand why draco hates them.
    great chapter!
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  • From ANON - bunnicle on May 07, 2008
    oh. oh, I so cannot believe they did that... no, wait, look who I'm talking about. Of course I can. I wonder how draco and harry will get out of this mess.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 07, 2008
    I sooo need chapter 5!!! This is bad!!! What are they going to do?
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  • From Yume111 on May 01, 2008
    Now that Harry has made up his mind, he is giving himself completely, because that
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  • From alleycat88 on April 28, 2008
    Lucius...always so tactful isnt he? Thanks for updating hun! I missed you!
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  • From avihenda on April 28, 2008
    great read :-) looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 27, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 4!!!
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  • From Yume111 on April 18, 2008
    How does Draco feel about his parents? He is angry, apparently, but at the beginning of the chapter he sounds as if he secretly wished they would be able to reconcile (with them accepting him 100%, of course). Is this what he actually feels or is he so angry with them that he doesn
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 18, 2008
    Hmm, tell me...what other weapons ARE there in the world that people can use?

    I can only think of ''words, other people and money''.
    ************
    By the way, what direction are you thinking of going with this...and do you
    have this story almost written out or do you write as you go
    ?
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  • From avihenda on April 17, 2008
    I liked it. But now I have to go back and see what harry learned that he didn't tell draco. :-)

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