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Reviews for Pretty Kitty

By : CherryStarburst
  • From Vittani on July 16, 2008
    Hey dont worry about numbers dropping off,it happens sometimes n then you get a second wind. Only thing i'd say is that the story is a little slow paced, it might be an idea to start adding in more action. you know like the lead up to your conclusion, bringing some stuff forward or something. Just a suggestion. I liked the chapter though, as you said harry was moody but that was due to voldie being in his head during book five, so brill job on keeping in character.
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  • From wynja on July 16, 2008
    Hi you! I printed this story for a little night time reading, but I just got to get up and start the computer again when I read about fewer reviews! I REALLY hope they pick up, because this is one of the best cat-harry stories I have ever read... and DEFINATELY the best that is currently being updated... there is really only one other cat-fic I really love and that is "Cambiare por el migliore" on FF.net (don't know if you can post links here but if you can: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2468333/1/Cambiare_por_el_migliore )And that DOES have Lucius in it... I'm a sucker for that pairing... But the twins are absolutely adorable... allthough, I think they need to be a BIT more considerate towards Harry if they won't want their faces scratched... because soon they deserve it... YOu can't tease a pissed off cat like that.. *grins and glances at my own kittens*
    Anyway, hope the revs picks up, because I NEED you to stay inspired so I can have more kitty-harry.... :o)
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  • From ANON - Kept In Spades on July 16, 2008
    Oh no! I hate the blood quill! I hope that kitty!Harry is smart enough to leave and tell someone like the Twins. :) and have the twins kill Umbitch. ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2008
    Hi! I love your story but I think you should update more often. When It's been too long, I often forget about it! Maybe I'm not the only one?
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  • From anniea on July 16, 2008
    please update soon *kisses*
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  • From chantalmalfoy on July 16, 2008
    I totally understand your having to include parts of the book. But I must say that I can't wait for some more Harry/Twins smut! :) lol...
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  • From peacefulsleepr on July 16, 2008
    NOT THE BLOOD QUILL...have harry pull one up on londonbridges (umbridge) lol before she scars harry's precious skin..Harry goes threw enough abuse he dont need anymore from icky fat people!!!
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  • From ANON - Tina on July 16, 2008
    Just as a random comment, you made me feel insane for a bit. I was reading your story and planning to finish the last few chapters, when I suddenly noticed that there was another chapter. It took a while for me to realise that I hadn't missed the chapter when counting, it was recently added haha.

    Anyway, I am absolutely in love with this story.
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  • From midnightrose on July 16, 2008
    OOO!!!! Charlie so wants Severus!!!!! Hahaha! Please update soon! Loved the chapter!
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  • From HarryVik on July 13, 2008
    oh what will fred and george do when harry's getting hurt by umbridge? will harry even tell them? Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From HarryVik on July 13, 2008
    oh what will fred and george do when harry's getting hurt by umbridge? will harry even tell them?
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  • From Vittani on July 11, 2008
    Good chapter, Malfoys a prat, hope he gets his commupence.
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  • From DragonMcBaine on July 10, 2008
    A little boring but like you said it needed to be done. I really like the cat in the sun bit. that gave me a chuckle. can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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  • From Nefarious on July 10, 2008
    Great new chapter =]
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  • From ANON - Kept In Spades on July 10, 2008
    Great chapter! Ooo, but I hate Umbitch. Fred and George had better kill her for messing with their catboy. :)
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