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Reviews for Pretty Kitty

By : CherryStarburst
  • From yoseko on March 31, 2009
    I love this I can't wait til you write more!
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  • From wynja on March 30, 2009
    YAAAY! Twice as fun with double updates! ;o) YOu story really reminds me how much I HATED that B..ch Umbridge (Um-bitch? ;o) ) in the book... I think there is still dents from my fingers holding the book so hard while reading... AAARRRGH! Aaaanyway, loved both the chapters and no I'm a bit (a lot!) sad about the twins leaving, so I can't wait for the NEXT update... damn demanding readers, huh? ;o)
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  • From flameofthenight on March 30, 2009
    So here I am at 5:43 am having just read your story all the way through. I started at ..2 or so? I was going to go to bed honest. But I wanted to check and see if I might like reading this story in the new future so I could have something to look forward too. And thus, I found myself caught in this story. Admittedly at times I felt this were too rushed..or that you didnt give the characters that deserved it enough comeuppance..or that IdiotHarry appeared a bit too often..but on the whole this story is a work of sheer brilliance.
    I thus implore you to update soon!
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  • From maximusx3 on March 30, 2009
    Wonderful as always, I laughed out loud. I love your incorporation of the text, 'tis loverly!
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  • From Aalto on March 29, 2009
    Still a very good story, though there's to little Harry/twins in the chapters. Well written still, but could use a bit help with the smooth flow of the stoy.

    And I thought that that chasing tail was a canine thing?! You know, for dogs and such... At least I've never heard not to mention seen a cat chasing their own tail. I've always had the idea that cats think their to dignified to do so.

    But still, keep up the good work and update a bit sooner next time...! Rather have regular updates than an update once a month or so.
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  • From Elphaba on March 29, 2009
    Excellent update! Sad that Gred is leaving! Can't wait to see what else happens!
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  • From TheQueenAnne on March 12, 2009
    I'm wondering how far you're going to take the story - meaning to book 7 (minus Ginny, of course) or are you going to give your own version of Voldemort's defeat. I can't wait to see how you squeeze the twins in more!
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  • From Pledodge on March 10, 2009
    Still no neck scruffing, hmm? You had the perfect opportunity: "A hand grubbed the scruff of his neck and dragged him to the ground, a body covering his. George rubbed his side soothingly, even as his head was buried in Harry's shoulder."
    But you didn't... I don't even know why that's so important to me. Oh well. You know, I just thought; What would happen if Harry chased his tail? A lot of cats do that, and well...
    I can totally see him doing it.
    Anyways, love the story, blah blah blah, update as soon as you're able, and all that.
    I'll be waiting!
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  • From ANON - Ande on March 07, 2009
    Hello. I realize that this may be a little late in the game, but do you think that I could be added to the mailing list? I absolutely adore this story and would love to know when it is updated. Thank you!

    Ande
    cullenlove101276@gmail.com
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  • From Aalto on March 06, 2009
    Still an exellent story, well written and all. But yes, you are skipping a bit to much. And I seriously hope you WON'T skip Fred and Georges magnificent protest pranks and grand exit...!
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  • From Elphaba on March 03, 2009
    Interesting chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From wynja on March 03, 2009
    *grin* Harry hitting Draco in the face was just priceless! Poor Draco! Innocent and all!... err... NOT... This chapter also reminded me how much I lived Hermionies little curse in the book... *grin*
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  • From HarryVik on March 03, 2009
    Og another chapter. I am in heaven. Please update soon.
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  • From maximusx3 on March 03, 2009
    At last I have an account and can review! I am totally in love with this story, every nit of it, and it keeps getting better and better. Well done indeed!
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  • From ANON - ZipMeOff on March 02, 2009
    Well, I'm sorry to put it that way, but this chapter was useless... it's the SAME as in the book, but with f&g around and words like "crap" and "bollocks". Same fucking thing! If you don't want to create a new plotline, at LEAST please don't re-write the story we all remember... especially if it adds nothing to your own story...
    But at least, be sure i'll continue to read and review Pretty Kitty. I like this story a great deal, i was just displeased by this chapter.
    I don't mean to be...well, mean, by writting it that way, but I'm sure a lot of the readers have the same opinion. Your story is loveable, you just copy the book a lot to much. It's OK if you keep the same plotline as JK does, just don't...re-write it.
    Anyway, I'll keep an eye on this story. I just loooooved the other chapters, so be it.
    good luck for the next one!!
    have a nice day
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