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Reviews for Don't Get Caught

By : fbowden
  • From FallenAngel1129 on August 10, 2008
    yay happt ending! lol

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  • From twocanz on August 10, 2008
    Spoke to soon, sorry! I thought the 5th chapter was the end! Loved the ending. How very sweet. Wished there was a little more written on Ginny's reaction. Not that I dislike her just that I love anyone that could take Harry away from here, that's all!lol I verbally said 'ouch!' when Al told Harry he got the 'good one'. I felt sure he would suddenly confess that he's disappointed Harry took his crush away from him.
    Anyway, great story! Thanks for writing it!
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  • From twocanz on August 10, 2008
    That was brilliant! I don't know if you're going to continue, but I hope you at least write another Harry/Scorpius(sp?) fic! You should ask AFF to put a Harry/Scorpius pairing in the listing so someone could get to this one and others quicker. I never thought of that pairing before, I was still trying to find proper Al/Scorpius stories, but that was sufficently hot! To bad about the ending, and that Draco basicallly destroyed his son's love life. No telling how this will affect Scorpius in future relationships. But question for you, were you insinuating with the last line about Scorpius' crush on Potter being inappropriate and he'll get over it, he's being a Malfoy after all, meaning that Draco had had a crush on Harry or maybe felt something for Al?
    Anyway, great story! If it hadn't been for SoftObsidian74 having this in her recommended reading list, I would have never found it!
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  • From prettypinkpony on April 25, 2008
    whew. for a second there, when Scorpius didn't turn up, I thought maybe Draco had killed him. Luckily there was a happy ending. *sighs happily*
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  • From Tesgura on April 24, 2008
    That is such the cute ending! It's too bad that James didn't accept it, but I guess everything couldn't be perfect. Great story and I loved the ending.
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  • From Jilliane on April 24, 2008


    Awwwww! *sniff* I do adore a happy ending! That was lovely!

    I'll admit though, you did have me worried there for a minute. It was quite difficult to resist jumping ahead to make sure everything turned out well. I love it that Harry still loves James, and can understand his attitude. I loved the moment between Harry and Al, when Harry asked why Draco, and Al's reply, that Harry got the good one. I love it that Al and Lily stood by Harry. I love it that Scorpius loves Harry as much as Harry loves him, and of course, I loved the grand gesture of Harry's, giving up everything, his job, braving others' criticism, for the one he loves and a chance at happiness.

    Yay! Bravo, Flic! :D


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  • From Jilliane on April 22, 2008

    Oh, I'm glad that Harry actually cares for Scorpius, loves him, and isn't just using him, as Draco did Al. And what about Al?


    I'm sure you'll let us know...

    Update soon please!! :)
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  • From Tesgura on April 21, 2008
    YAY! Harry and Scorpius are finding a way around the law and around Draco more importantly. I'm so happy they'll be able to bond and be happy together now, and I can't wait to read more of this.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 21, 2008
    OMG...I just read the first chapter, and I feel so dirty...that was hot man...I'm gonna read the read and then review....how old is Scorpius in this? I guess I'll find out. I can't believe you made Harry so dirty...and it's so fun...can't wait to read more!
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  • From Jilliane on April 20, 2008

    That was touching and bittersweet and Oh! The angst!

    Chapters like these are why you're one of my favourite authors. Flic. I love the angst, and you do it SO well. All the need, the want, the hunger...and you still manage to get Harry swearing revenge in there too. I can't wait to see what he plans for Draco. More, for the love of God, MORE!!!!

    Soon please!
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  • From WarpedMinded on April 20, 2008
    aww, that's sad.
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  • From Tesgura on April 19, 2008
    Wow Draco's a douche bag. I mean, if his son was happy, then he should have been happy for him but no, he just cares about it being Harry and he had to fuck it up along with his son's happiness, didn't he. I hope he gets what's coming to him, I really do.
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  • From Jilliane on April 19, 2008

    Oh wow!! Great chapter!! I did not see that coming at all!!

    I am SO loving this story! I really shouldn't be surprised, Draco is a Malfoy after all, and a Slytherin to boot. Great stuff! Can't wait to see what happens next. Will Harry plot revenge? Will Scorpius believe him? Up date SOON, please!
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  • From Jilliane on April 18, 2008


    Oh-oh! You're right, this is twisty-turny, and this is a very nice twist. Can't wait to see what happens between these two. Will Draco taunt Harry? Will Harry admit he's glad it wasn't Scorpius....oh, but wait....you didn't say it wasn't Scorpius, did you? Hmmm...
    Oh! Please hurry and update before I drive myself crazy!
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  • From servantofall36 on April 18, 2008
    This is amazing. I have never seen Harry in this venue, as the aggressor in a relationship with a younger man. I think it works well. It is a tribute to your ability that you are able to write a mostly narrative story and make it absolutely fascinating.
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