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Reviews for All Coming Back to me Now

By : Utopia
  • From ANON - Desiree on April 18, 2008
    YES YES YES
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  • From ANON - wishyouwere on April 18, 2008
    Hello,
    This is really an interesting and original story idea, and it deserves to continue. I will not presume to tell you how I think that story might go, but even with the fall of Voldemort, there would be many things to be resolved with Draco, Aurelius (and how much do I love that name?!?) and her friends and past collegues. There is the making of a very good story that might be done in a few more chapters.
    Excellent!
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  • From on April 18, 2008
    YES!!!!!!!!

    I think there is alot more story to be explored...backwards onto how this all came about and the building of the relationship and forwards to a time after the battle and maybe discovering the secret....how would all react????
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on April 18, 2008
    Although i adore this story and would love to see another chapter, this is perfect within itself.


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  • From ANON - AlexandraMalfoy on April 18, 2008
    So here is my vote: Thumbs up!
    I was not sure at the beginning of the story. But as it moved on, I discovered, that it was quite different to the rest
    Moine-Lucius-stories. He is rather tender, human, Draco is nicer, drawn to the new Narcissa and it would be a shame
    if I won't be able to figure out, who wins the battle. So, is this enough reason?
    Okay, here is another one: Being a newpaper journalist I'm often forced to write a story I feel detached from. However, sometimes
    the readers discover things about it, that puzzle me afterwards and somehow it is awarding. But if you don't try, you'll never know.
    Okay, I'm a bit selfish here.
    Its a free world, take your choice.
    Thanks anyways.
    Greetings, Alex
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  • From ANON - Lin on April 18, 2008
    Two-shot definitely! Wonderful story!
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  • From dawnangel on April 18, 2008
    Yes. This story has so much potential, I always say Write to your full potential, and there is more to see in this story. It doesn't have to be a lot, just a firm statement as to if they win the battle, and whether or not the spell Snape does is completed or if Lucius talks her out of it. Or if Draco, and Harry ever figure it out. I just read this story and fell in love with the plot and would like to see a finalized ending.
    Thanks
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  • From tinytot on April 18, 2008
    I would love a sequel :) Either way, its a very nice story. Good job!
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  • From Shalengreh on April 18, 2008
    i'd love a sequal....
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  • From ANON - Emma on April 18, 2008
    Yes, continue this story. There are so many questions left unanswered. What will happen to Lucius and Hermione (Narcissa)? Will Arelius look like Hermione? How will it be explained? Will Draco ever find out?
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  • From LaBibliographe on April 18, 2008
    Chapters 1-2: Ah, Narcissa
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on April 18, 2008
    I think it is perfect where you left it because I don't think I could handle Hermione's inner misery. However, I would love to see you write a new Lucius/Hermione chaptered story. Now that I have discovered you, I intend to go and have a look at the stories you have already written which are displayed on your author's page.
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  • From ANON - KITSUNE on April 18, 2008
    YES! i really liked this one shot... it was very out of the mold... yes yes
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  • From on April 18, 2008
    No - I did ask if you would write more, but I read it again & changed my mind. She forgave him & I'm not sure how you could follow up without being too fluffy or horribly sad. Hermione did have a choice in this (not the kid part). She knew her death was faked & it would be quite hard to go back to being Hermione again. Anyway, these are just my thoughts & if you write more I'll obviously read it :)
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  • From ANON - Genevi on April 18, 2008
    NO... Unless you can plan the story before you write it... If not I think it can be the recipe of the famous writer block. For my part, I like the story the way it is.
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