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Reviews for A Time of Changes and Decisions

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From ANON - bowsie22 on April 03, 2010
Wow. Ron and Ginny need help, don't they? Well, Draco needs it more. I love the Fred/George mpreg. That's very rare. I hope you update again =D
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From ANON - sweettee on January 26, 2010
glad Hermione is okay,and that Harry now knows the truth
and that Ron and Ginny is getting ready to go to prison
please up date soon so I can see what happens next.
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From ANON - omnni on February 06, 2009
want more.
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From BrianLovesJustin on January 21, 2009
Just finished reading the 1st 4 chapters, brilliant start, but please update soon, as for Ron and Ginny I hope Harry eventually comes back and deals with them
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From POOHBEAR74 on January 16, 2009
I so hope they kill ron and ginny!

great so far!
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From ANON - omnni on January 16, 2009
poor draco and harry, hope it gets better for them. Hope there will be more soon.
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From thrnbrooke on January 16, 2009
Sooo need chapter 5!!!
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From sonykit on January 15, 2009
Hey there! i was just reading chapter 3 and checking if i already reviewed the first two chapters (coz i really love your story) when suddenly there was chapter 4! yay to more chapters! anyways... on to the review.
the third chapter was very well written - very vivid descriptions and intense emotions. it really draws the reader to empathize with draco's misery. i think its desperate how he clings to the very last thread of hopes of ever seeing harry again and that really gets across his misery and desperation, as well as love and trust for harry.
then comes chapter 4 where we finally get to see harry. in the last chapter, you foreshadowed hermione's absence from the picture without giving anything away. so the hermione-cursing incident was a surprising twist. i like the fact that you did not draw out those four long months and just came to the point where hermione wakes up. yet you did not lose points for that since the opening paragraphs in chapter 4 were really great. the reader can feel harry's confusion and sadness, apprehension and longing.
all in all. good job! hopefully harry gets to see draco real soon. hoping to read more of this story soon! thanks for sharing!

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From on June 10, 2008
you have me crying into my key broad now.
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From bananasforyou on April 21, 2008
poor him. im tearing up here!
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From ANON - Miss Star on April 20, 2008
Okay, I am going to review Chapter one and two together.

First off let me start by saying that you have the potential for a great story, however for me the plot is sort of full of plot holes. The chapters are well written and your style is good. I hope you update soon and keep up with the story?

Question: How does Lucius know about Draco and Harry?

0) Why would Lucius bring Draco to a death eater raid to prove his loyality, so why did Lucius allow him to go off on his own. I mean if I was Draco, pregnant and know that my father will punish me (knowning Lucius with painful and harmful curses), this is turn might cause me to lose the child of my beloved. Then I have 3 choices:
a) Do as he says, curse innocent people nothing deadly but enough to escape punishment.
b) Find a dark cornor and shoot curses at Death Eaters or at random things so that when Lucius checks my wand it shows that I did as told. In all of the choas no one would be wiser. Or last
c) RUN AWAY.

Instead Draco seems to be acting out of character for himself or a Sytherin. I don't seem him passively deciding to possible bring harm to his family to save people he does not know. At least we would see him scheming setting plans in motion to escape especially so close to Hogwarts. I mean if I was him I would be under the assumption that Harry would show up to the battle since he is at Hogwarts and with his rushing in nature he would come. So why wasn't Draco looking for him? Why wasn't Draco being proactive after all he admits if the Dark Lord and his Father find out about the baby, it will not be pretty.

1a) The twins: With Death Eaters still in town and a dark battle raging they come to town to check on the pub? Especially with one of the twins being pregnant? Then they are like oh good thing it has fire charms on it our it would have burned like the hogs head. This is not their business and I am sure the owner would understand them NOT immediately running to the town to check on it. I mean why not wait until the all clear is sounded. Suppose it was a more serious threat then Draco in the Pub. Wounded DE's or DE waiting to ambush or restart the attach. So why come now.

1b) Why was Draco not better prepared:
a) He has magic and his wand! I am sure that between Hogwarts where he was a top student and his father he knows enough spells to --- Ward the room? To lay charms to let him know when someone apporaches? something to prepare him in case of attack whether friendly or foe. He has Children and himself to protect and Sltherins do that well. The Twins should not of caught him unaware in fact it should have been the other way around.

2) The twins came through a secret tunnel to get to the pub. So why would they march Draco through a town that had just been attacked? Even if Fred does not know about the baby George does and thus even if they put him to sleep and float him through tunnel that would be safer for all involved. What if a Crowd had formed and tried to attack then in order to take Draco? But if for some reason they could not bring through the tunnels why didn;t they change his cloths (they have magic) change his hair color so things that would basically not call attention to them. And if they were not going to be that smart why take his wand, it might have come down to a fight. It is not like he was going to be carrying it on the outside of his body.

3) Them know the situation with Draco and Harry so why did they not give him back his wand, once they got into the room? Why did they lock Draco in, at first I thought to prevent others from coming in but Ron, Ginny and Hermione got in. So not I am starting to doubt them because it look likes they locked him to keep him prisoner especially since they did not return his wand. After all Hogwarts is not exactly friendly to him right now.

Chapter 2:

My question is if Harry is at the Ministry; why is Ron, Ginny and Hermione in his room: With him not being in the castle why are they going through his rooms?

1) The twin must know how Ginny and Ron feel about homosexuals --- And Draco Malfoy in particular especially since people are not accepting thier relationship. So why would they tell them that Draco was in the building? Surely since it does not look like the people in the castle took part in the battle. It must have been easy for them to determine that Harry was not there and George at least would know better and take the pregnant man food and drink and let him know what is happening.

2) Hermione -- with friends like her why would Harry need Enemies? Harry told her how he felt about Draco, the depth of his feelings. So she just stands around why his love his beaten by Ron. Why kind of twist thought pattern is that Ron is trying to protect Harry? If Ron after 2 months can't accept that Harry was Gay, then is he Harry's friend? It seems to me Ron is trying to force Harry into loving his sister not protect him. Hermione has effectly choosen Ron and Ginny over Harry or her being the smartest witch in her generation would have cast a spell to prevent them from harming him much less going to find people to take him to prison?

Also what signs could Hermione see that let her know he was pregnat. Smart does not mean she everything little thing always adds up to 2. He just got beaten by Ron. And I am sure Harry did not go into detail about what actually happened during their one special night together so Harry could have been the bottom. So why assume male pregnancy? Why not assume he is slow and hurt from his beaten.

But putting that asside, why wouldn't she either help Draco escape or go to Snape? Dumbledore? or some other higher arthority figure in the castle or hide him in the room of requirement, until Harry can be located? Why would she just sit back knowing and allowing her best friend's pregnant love go to the worse prison in the world? What is more dangerous to the fight against Voldemont; Ron being angery with her for stopping him from doing what she knows to be wrong and selffish on his part. Or Harry's guilt if he finds out the friends he trusted, who knew how he felt about Draco sent him to jail and what if Draco and or child died. I don't think I would want to be around Harry. I would want to be on another planet? And what if he abandoned his post to take care of the care instead of fighting Voldemont

When did Hermione give up her morals and knowledge of what is right? Why would she just blindly follow actions she knows are wrong.

Again where are the twins?

Hope to see an update soon
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From ANON - M. on April 19, 2008
Didn't notice that chapter 2 was up when I reviewed.

So, Fuck Ron and his homophobia.
I hope Hermione can protect Draco. Azkaban is no place for someone who is pregnant .
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From ANON - M. on April 19, 2008
I like it, a lot.
I hope Harry wasn't counting on a one night stand but that doesn't sound very Harry like.
Although I am curious as to why Draco wouldn't have at least owled or something from Malfoy Manor.
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From sonykit on April 19, 2008
gah!!! that chapter was unexpected! i thought draco was finally getting to see harry but apparently, twists are on the way. i am so wanting to strangle ron and ginny, and maybe even slap hermione for just standing there. i am, for the most part, anxious to see if draco will indeed end up in azkaban and if harry will get to him soon enough. great twist there. so looking forward to more. ;)
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From thrnbrooke on April 19, 2008
Hermione could change the wards to keep everyone but Harry out of the room. She could protect Draco! I sooo need chapter 3!!! Will Harry get there in time?
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