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Reviews for Cat and Mouse

By : TheSiner
  • From ANON - Kimi Lowe on October 11, 2012
    Love the story...
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on June 14, 2011
    This is a really good story, but there are a few problems. You have Harry getting pregnant as a male, No Problem. But then you have the talk in the infirmary about him having become a hermaphrodite, OK different but ok. But lastly, when giving birth you have him getting cut open due to not having the part necessary for normal delivery. This is wrong. A hermaphrodite has both male and female parts and so having a natural birth might be difficult but would be ok. It would be better if you just dropped the gender issue altogether, or say it was being a difficult birth and so had to go and cut the baby out. But, everything considered, I enjoyed the story.
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  • From ANON - Aerin on November 24, 2010
    I just cant get over the fact that after you made Harry suffer for so long, that you didn't at least have him cold towards the Malfoys for a longer period of time rather then a measley half a chapter. Where's the anger? Where's his strength of character? Where's his backbone? Where's Harry? Disappointed with the trite fluffy ending but otherwise a commendable effort.
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  • From ANON - anessavanella on December 11, 2008
    I can't believe I waited this long to read this! I put it in "yet to read" list and its really good! I wish it wasn't done but it is, I laughed, I cried (not really) and things you would normally do in a good movie or...a fanfiction[anessavanella@aim.com]
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2008
    oh and there is a difference not many people KNOW between "now and know"
    NOW I wish you a good day :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2008
    i liked it, but try to learn to use "the" its missing a hundred times
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  • From ANON - kawaiiyashie on September 12, 2008
    wow that was a great story yay i think i've already read this story but oh well i juswt reread it i enjoyed it again.
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  • From RDWind on July 07, 2008
    This is a good story, at least from the first chapter. Do us a favor though... Go back and reread the story and look at it close. There are a LOT of missed words and misused words. Help is only an e-mail away.

    --RD
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  • From kneeya on May 31, 2008
    Thank you, I really did enjoy the story!(smile)Even though there was some unfinished business in the end. All in all I really like the your story! Did I mentioned that I enjoyed your story? Thank you again.
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  • From alma on May 24, 2008
    A very good story just a little rushed at the end, it's all good though.
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  • From h2elena on May 23, 2008
    ooh sorry to see this story end so quick. aahh see i knew harry and his lucius were in love. Seriously draco needs to find someone of his own,harry does not think of him that way,that was made very clear to draco when harry ignored him after voldy tried to kill lucius and lucius was trying to protect harry from voldy. Can you please email me lol when you do the sequel lol. I want to find out the babies name and who draco will end up with maybe blaise or snape. helenaloud@gmail.com
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  • From h2elena on May 23, 2008
    Thud thud thud thats the sound of me knocking some sense into lucius harry asked him if he loved him. your such a gryffindor harry so not the right answer. have to hurry off now and read the next chapter.
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  • From Slytherdor on May 23, 2008
    Great fic, but the ending was a tad abrupt.
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  • From alma on May 18, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From dominique1 on May 17, 2008
    this is a sweet story but i feel sorry poor harry i hope thath sev fines that harry's life was hell and that he should reget everthing he did to harry and i hope they actually have a family
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