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By : Lifvared
  • From Heidi191976 on May 08, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From amyfeddy on May 08, 2008
    Enough with the cliffhangers. I will send you a new muse if the one you have isn't working.I really like this story, and can't wait any longer.
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  • From jessirose85 on May 08, 2008
    I wonder if July 25th was the day Hermione was given to the Grangers from Dumbledore and McGonagall OR its the day she had to leave the wizarding world with Hermione and Hermione is Dumbledore and McGonagall's granddaughter...just theories of mine..hope we find out in the next chapter...update soon please xxxx
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on April 25, 2008
    I like the premise of this story but I think you need a beta. You need to fix up your spelling, paragraph a bit more and start a new sentence every time a line of dialogue is spoken. I don't meant to be picky I give this advice as constructive criticism.

    I can't wait to find out who Hermione's father is...though I have a fair idea!

    Hurry up and update!....LOL
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on April 23, 2008
    It seems nice so far. Though will she find out at Harrys party?
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  • From Sampdoria on April 23, 2008
    Very interesting, not at least who Hermiones father is. A wizard, yes, someone who have a son about Hermiones age, probably not a Malfoy since this is a Hermione/Draco story. Due to the harshness in his words I guess that it was a follower of Voldemort. I could have guessed a LeStrange, but neither of them have children in Hermiones year, hopefully not, and most likely not, Crabbe or Goyle. Zabini? Nott? Update soon and let us know:-)
    A tiny little whish at the end; Dumbledore talked about glamours, please don't change Hermione into some Barbiedoll with blue eyes and blond, sleek hair, 6 feet tall and a DD-cup. First of all that would not be the Hermione we know and love, seccond it is in a way like saying that Hermione ain't good enough as she is, and since she is my favourite character I would recent that:-). She migth not be Hermione Granger, well, actually she is, Granger is the one who have aknowlegded her as his child, and that makes him her father, and her a Granger, the one who is the biological father walked away from her and never aknowlegded her and thus have no claim on her. A change in eyecolour, and maybe bushy hair made into curls yes, more than that would make her a stranger. I prefer stories with Hermione as one of the main characters (as long as she is never, ever paired with Ron, I hate that pairing), but if all that "is left" is her name, much of the reason for reading would be lost.
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  • From kmplease on April 23, 2008
    Please update soon I love it, great story
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  • From jennifercarteroneill on April 23, 2008
    Nice. Add more soon please. Can't wait to find out who her father is. I think I know, but I'm keeping that to myself.
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  • From aloveablegimp on April 23, 2008
    Ooo! The suspension is killing me! This is going to be so much fun when it all comes apart! I cannot wait for the next update and I hope you update soon. Once again another amazing chapter!

    Love and a Peace,
    ~*~Kates~*~
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 23, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more to see who her real father is.
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  • From jessirose85 on April 23, 2008
    so close...we are about to find out..update soon xx
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  • From angelnomiko on April 23, 2008
    ahhh noo ..who's her father and how did albus get in to the mix .. please please more later for now

    angel
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  • From LilianaIsabellaSnape on April 22, 2008
    Ooooooooo interesting!!! Can't wait to find out more!!! ^^
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  • From prettypinkpony on April 22, 2008
    woo hoo. Another step closer to learning the truth. Cant wait.
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  • From bananasforyou on April 22, 2008
    i like it!
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