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Reviews for It Cannot Be...

By : Lifvared
  • From luvhp on April 22, 2008
    Hmm, who can it be?? Good Lord don't let it be Lucius, then that makes Hr/D half siblings! XD Of course, I read Weaslecycest, so why not some Malfoycest as well, LOL
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 22, 2008
    This is a great start. I look forward to reading more to see what the secret is and how Hermione deals with it when she is told about it.
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  • From prettypinkpony on April 22, 2008
    Yep I liked it and yep I wanna read more so if you have a mailing list sign me up K?

    noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
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  • From angelnomiko on April 22, 2008
    wow that was great .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From aloveablegimp on April 22, 2008
    Very interesting. I am really intrigued and I cannot wait to see whom Hermione's real father is! This is a DracoxHermione story right? Like eventually they will get together and have sex? 'Cuz it's sounding to me like Lucius is Hermione's real dad and you have your story in this category so I was just curious. Hahah! I bet I am really far off and will be shocked as to who it is! If you want a beta I would be more than happy to help out. Please update soon!

    Love and a Peace,
    ~*~Kates~*~
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  • From nonentity on April 22, 2008
    It's a lovely beginning, and fairly well-written. I like that Hermione figures out something's funny because of her mom's behavior on a particular date.

    I think the summary needs some work. People may be afraid to read the story because so many 14-year olds use that plotline and fail to do it well. Maybe use the "why is Mom always sad on July 25th?" as your summary?
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