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Reviews for Lovely Bones

By : emilywaters
  • From bananasforyou on May 16, 2008
    is that it? i want to see them try to kill tom!!please.
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on May 16, 2008
    The End? what the heck? you can't end it there. r u crazy? you give us this whole explanation & then u end it?
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 16, 2008
    Wow! I sooo hope they get their chance! Tooo bad once Severus dies so do they. A shame they can't return to their bodies. Though I'm not sure they'd want to.
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  • From tigra9969 on May 16, 2008
    More please!?!?!

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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 16, 2008
    Just have to say that Sanctuary is one of the most beautiful things you've written. It's almost poetic in its execution and meaning and it's more than a fitting end to this story. Seriously made me tear up. The whole story's concept is haunting, but this last chapter really takes the cake and conveys so much about life, death, and what it means to actually live for both those who were sentenced to get the kissed and those who have only their bodies to torment as live out the rest of their existence. Beautiful beautiful chapter Emily : )
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  • From ANON - Ash on May 16, 2008
    That is really good. The first chapter kind off put me off but I'm glad that I continued reading. That was brilliant by the way.
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 16, 2008
    :::shudder::: I expected nothing less from the dark lord...that was bloody awful, sadistic, and fulfilling, because as much as he wants to hurt him, he knows he'll never really be able to the way he's aching to..haha take that asshole.
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on May 16, 2008
    Oh wow, I didn't know you continued this...these are all so haunting, creepy and beautiful Emily. I really really loved the second and third one...well shit, all of them....but I think the second one is really striking. Your mind is wicked for thinking of this. It's amazing in waking death that these characters come to life as themselves while still falling short of the fantasies the people who keep them want them to be. Excellent...as usual...write more..please
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  • From ANON - Kendra Lee on May 16, 2008
    Ooooh! Amazing use of Barret-Brownings sonnet, it fits really well.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 16, 2008
    I think death would have been better for all of them. Even though their souls are no longer there.
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  • From Ellanath on May 15, 2008
    Wow! Creepy at it's best. You know I almost feel sorry for Bella, Lucius, and Draco. Almost. It was odd to read no life to the trio, yet I could see how each one would appear to their master. You captured each one of [their] traits throughout this tale and I could really see how each one of their dolls affected them so. I would like to see how the Dark Lord uses his doll/Severus, now that would be interesting.
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  • From ANON - WickerRose on May 04, 2008
    This is beautiful.
    Please, Please write more!!
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  • From IncessantDarkness29 on May 04, 2008
    I'm almost frightened to see what Bella is like. Because no matter how sentimental Draco and Lucius might be, Bella is just plain mad and for that reason I pity Ron.

    While I'm reading this though I keep getting the odd feeling that they're all just faking this but then I don't suppose that should be possible.

    Anyways I sincerely hope to read more.

    - Incessant_Darkness
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  • From X5927alpha on May 03, 2008
    Wow...that's one of the most interesting...or two of the most interesting, things I have read in a long time.

    I wonder if there is a way to bring someone back after they get the kiss...meh.
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  • From Tesp71283 on May 02, 2008
    haha loved it. It was an interesting interaction between the two, even if it seemed onesided. I like the little tricks in the shadow and the mind and how sometimes we convince ourselves to interpret every little thing that happen around us, whether we believe or disregard them, whether if they are real or not. I'm not making sense, but I liked this chapter. If it happens, I'd be interested in seeing what happens with Ron and Severus as well.
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