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Reviews for Lovely Bones

By : emilywaters
  • From HardyHarr on May 01, 2008
    oh wow, I like
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  • From Sakya on May 01, 2008
    It is almost funny in a way, you can see the Malfoys crumbling before your eyes... I wonder if the other
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  • From alleycat88 on May 01, 2008
    God this story is good! Please more!
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  • From avihenda on May 01, 2008
    This was brilliantly writen. feels like an eerie, tragic lovestory, nearly like a classic ghost story. Really well writen, beutiful even.

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  • From thrnbrooke on May 01, 2008
    Almost feel sorry for Lucius! Will there be a chapter 3?
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  • From Tesp71283 on April 25, 2008
    I like this story as it is. However, I wonder if I would like this story as a multichapter. Not because I'm looking for a particular ending or anything, but I feel that Draco was set up with an interesting dilemma and I would like to see the effects on his character on the long run. Like if it gets to the point where health wise he is not allowed to drink any more of the dreamless potion and the nightmare start again, what would that mean for his sanity, would he start confusing his dreams with reality or start to question 'the doll's' reactions. Would Potter's ghost haunt him then treat him with pity as Draco becomes more paranoid and more violent? I dunno, I still like it as a one shot. Good work!
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  • From bananasforyou on April 25, 2008
    i like it!
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  • From Calrissian18 on April 24, 2008
    Well, you're also quite capable of dysfunction, no? Haha. I loved it, much more....normal (if that's the right word) than mine! I'm glad you decided to give it a go, you did fantastically. I hope you'll keep writing, it was wonderful!
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  • From ANON - M. on April 24, 2008
    How sad, I can't imagine a lifeless Harry but at least he still haunts Draco in his dreams.
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  • From ANON - Anon45 on April 24, 2008
    your stories are always weird and freaky...i like it
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 24, 2008
    Wow! Nicely done! Morbid! Almost like necrophelia. Now that's icky!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 24, 2008
    Wow. How disturbing is this? ....reminds me of "The Dark Side of Light" by Mya...only there Draco had received the kiss and Harry was quite insane. This is more ambiguous and I like how we're inside of Draco's head, which makes it a bit more unnerving. You keep surprising me with the perspectives, themes, and plots you come up with. LOVE it.
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  • From ANON - Jo on April 24, 2008
    That is...incredibly disturbing. In a good way, though.
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  • From Rosland on April 24, 2008
    Interesting concept. I love the story and the idea as well. You should do a story that begns just like this one only some how harry's soul finds his way back . . . without draco's knowledge of course. How funny would it be if harry's soul was there all along just waiting for the right time giving draco those horrible nightmares.
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  • From alleycat88 on April 24, 2008
    Phew that was hardcore my love! I like how you left the end very ambiguous...^.^ Please keep writing!
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