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Reviews for Vain Wisdom All and False Philosophy

By : Lissa1011
  • From ANON - girl_with_wings on May 22, 2008
    Hi there
    I am waiting with baited breath for the next installment! You create anticipation very skillfully and i think the conflict between Hermione and Snape is very in keeping with their characters and more in line with the atmosphere of the story you are creating. Please write the next chapter sooN!
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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on May 19, 2008
    Hooray, hooray, hooray! Another chapter. I cannot wait to see the multiple confrontations in the next chapter!
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  • From on May 19, 2008
    Very good chapter.
    I love this story. It's a SS/HG... but at the same time it's not. It's bigger. Hermione does seem to be the main character, but there are so many other important ones.
    It doesn't focus on Hermione and Severus, they're just part of this swirling mass of story.
    It's very, very interesting.
    And I love how Severus and Hermione just can't keep away from each other, despite how wonderfully dysfunctional they are. I can't wait for their next lemon.
    Also, the whole Pansy/Hermione conversation was intriguing. I like how they hate each other but still come to some sort of understanding (I hate stories that randomly have enemies become best friends it like, two seconds).
    Anyway, keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From MooMandy on May 16, 2008
    WOO HOO!!! About frakin' time! Awesome job, dear!!! "Silly girl, you already do."- how HOT!!! Man, I shouldn't be so excited when two fictional characters have sex. I sooo need a life! Happy writing, luv! Tengo que blah, blah, blah. Killer K
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  • From SilentTremor on May 14, 2008
    you stopped there? Please update soon!
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  • From Lauriurix on May 14, 2008
    omigod :D

    so interesing and looky lemons n__n

    hehehe addicted to this story is all i can say :)
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  • From MooMandy on May 13, 2008
    I've said it before and I'll probably say it again- Severus is such an ass!!! Poor Hermione, she must have it bad to put up with him!!! But, I love his snarkiness- true Snape!!! Great update, dear! Happy writing!!! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K
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  • From ANON - BlaqueRose on May 11, 2008
    I love the Hermione/Severus pairing and I love Severus's character above all... However, it's rare to find someone who I feel captures his personality perfectly. I accidentally stumbled upon this story yesterday after browsing the stories of one of my favorite authors on here and I was absolutely stunned. I spent the better part of the night reading and re-reading this wonderful, addicting story. I love the suspense and I'm anxious to see what will happen between Severus and Hermione. I do hope it will have a happy ending though, I'd hate to see my dear Severus killed off again :-) Thanks for the beautiful story, keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on May 11, 2008
    Beautiful, thus far. I theorize (and I am stopping for the evening at chapter 12) that Lavender is what Hermione should be looking out for. I'd like to see much more Hermione/Snape interaction, however, given the ship this is posted under ^_^.
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  • From MooMandy on May 10, 2008
    Wow,wow,wow! It never ceases to amaze me all the intricate little plots and match-ups you have going on! I really love this volatile relationship with Severus and Hermione. He is such an ass! Which makes it so much hotter when these two are gettin' it on! Are they ever going to "get there"?! It's frustratingly mad- just imagine how frustrated Severus and Hermione must be with you! I must say I'm quite intrigued about the tat on Severus back. Designed from your wonderous imagination? I'd love to see a drawing of it! Love your fast updates- wish others could be as fast (you know who you are,L hint,hint *winking*). Can't wait to see where this is going! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K
    As a great fan of Ren and Stimpy you must know where my name comes from!!!
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  • From Lauriurix on May 10, 2008
    :D

    of course i like it :P even love it :D its soo good (:

    me wants more :D
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  • From on May 10, 2008
    I'm glad to hear you've got a good plan for all the plots.
    I figured you probably did, but I've seen enough good stories fizzle out because the authors decide not to follow through with their earlier plans or forget about certain character development that they started.
    I just wanted to nudge a little and make sure. This story is so good and holds so much promise, I'd hate to see it become mediocre in the end.
    Were you planning to have more of Lavender's POV? I feel like we only had that one, which sort of sticks out awkwardly from the more regular Hermione, Severus, Harry, Pansy Sirius and Lupin... though I suppose we also had a few other secondary character POVs, like Dumbledore and a couple death eaters so maybe it's not that weird.

    By the way, I hope that you don't take anything I've said or will say VERY seriously. You're story is so, altogether, better than mine that I feel a little presumptuous making all these comments. But I'm just trying to be helpful.

    Also, have I praised you for how often you update? It's like a little present every time I come on here.
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  • From ANON - girl_with_wings on May 09, 2008
    Thanks, I have been waiting anxiously for this chapter. Very satisfying, can't wait for more.
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  • From on May 08, 2008
    Oh good, I was beginning to think that our dark apathetic Severus was going soft on us.
    This chapter seemed quite realistic... though if you were being very canon Hermione might have cried more.
    She cries a lot in the books.
    Then again, that could be obnoxious. I'd just as soon rather have this.
    I still don't know where this Lupin storyline is going... it just seems so detached. Buuuut I trust you to pull it out in the end.
    That lemony chapter before was nice, but jeeze now it seems like they're NEVER going to get anywhere.

    Also... lets not forget about Lavender. I'm not a huge fan of the Harry/Lavender subplot here, but you introduced it so I think we have to know why she changed her tune (I don't think you can expect the readers simply to accept that she had a sudden change of heart). Also, was she just friendly to Hermione because of Harry, or what?
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  • From Lauriurix on May 08, 2008
    ohhh what a way to mend things :O

    a la Sev :p

    love the story (: keep it up!
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