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Reviews for Baby come back home soon.

By : NightDragon07
  • From purefaith91 on February 06, 2011
    Not liking the way SS came in and told her that he could take them any time he wanted. She needs to get back in control of her kids. I would have told him that if he could not follow my wishes until I felt comfortable with him around them, I would take them and he would never see any of them again. And then he takes of with the child after drinking...nice. She is obviously still intimidated by him and so shrinks back when he is agressive. p
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on October 02, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on October 29, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 18, 2008
    This is a great story. I hope that you update soon.
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  • From dannilawless on September 17, 2008
    I'm really enjoying your story, but |I think you really need someone to beta your dialogue. You seem to use the word 'For' a bit too much. Eg. For I will have to take them both. Instead, I'll have to take the two of them. (it sounds more natural.) If ya need anything at all, let me know and I'd be delighted to give you some imput.
    well done tho. I'm really enjoying it.

    Danni :)
    danni@dublin.ie
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 04, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From SilentTremor on May 04, 2008
    i'd be more than happy to be your beta is you would like or don't already have one. I have a good turn-over for chapters so let me know. The email you can reach me at is: killi_sandra@yahoo.com.au
    Hope you are well.

    ~Sandra~
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  • From Sampdoria on May 03, 2008
    I am happy to see another update, I like your story (I am a sucker for Hermione running away and return with a child/children in tow) and look forward to read more.
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  • From NightDragon07 on May 03, 2008
    Thanks everyone! I love the reviews.. And for Paine.. I put my messenger on my profile if you have AIM.. If not.. my email is Nobodyspecail2002@yahoo.com.. I don't care if you all want to message me about it..Thanks!

    Lots of Love,
    Nightdragon
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  • From theorgskittles on May 03, 2008
    ok this chapter was real good My email address is at the top of this with my id on here. so you can email me at the email that is showing at the top

    but good story
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  • From catysmom1028 on May 02, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From theorgskittles on May 01, 2008
    Well if you need Beta i could do it for you.. i do not mind i am good at it. only if you still need one. if you dont then that is ok... but the story is getting good so far. I hope she can forgive him.
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  • From buriedalivebylove69 on April 30, 2008
    Your story is good but its kinda hard to read. Your dialog is to close together and it gets a bit confusing. instead of writing it like this....


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  • From angelnomiko on April 29, 2008
    that was great .. please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From catysmom1028 on April 29, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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