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Reviews for Brother of All, With Generous Hand

By : gypsyqueen
  • From bloodshound on December 09, 2011
    well, so far this is fun. I look forward to more... Is it illegal to transfigure or in this case potion your student... er helper, into a small animal?
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  • From isisfiredancer on June 16, 2008
    I like it.
    It's funny and witty and made me smile all the way through...
    Images of leather, trampolines and whipped cream helped as well :D
    Keep it up I'm intreged
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  • From Jilliane on May 22, 2008
    (Chapter 2)

    Still loving it.....and had a laugh at the title and action....Snape berating a small animal.....wonder who she is?

    This story is a little....fragmented...or disjointed? (not sure of the correct way to describe it) almost like a dream, but I find I like that..it's different from the norm. I'm looking forward to more chapters as soon as you can.

    And thanks so much for the mention! I am enjoying the story!
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  • From ANON - -Kinky-Kitty- on May 21, 2008
    This is really good so far. Please continue.
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  • From Selera on May 20, 2008
    Oh dear.. something is up. Please keep up the good work.
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  • From enslavementthesis on May 19, 2008
    Lol, it's very British, your sense of humour.

    It's very good, but just a small suggestion. Your writing is just a little rough, as if it was done all on one go without too much thought to tweaking it afterwards. With a tiny bit of smoothing out, this could be absolutely fantastic, instead of just really good.

    Other than that, your writing style and your dialogue is witty, very droll and well worth the read. Hope you update soon!
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  • From SuzieGeorge on May 06, 2008
    Tee hee, oh I can see this is gonna be hella funny! Greatly looking forward to reading more. ^_^
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  • From DarkGothic on May 03, 2008
    interesting I'm curious to see how this turns out
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  • From Kooldragon400 on May 03, 2008
    This has lots of promise. I hope you plan on keeping this story going. I do love 'Professor Potter.' He's not so different than the rest of us (Save that he has a magic wand....and magical it is...). Look forward to more!!
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  • From Jilliane on May 03, 2008


    Nice!

    Love Snape and McGonagall's "banter", and I like Harry's wide-eyed goggling, being on the teacher side of things now instead of the student side. I like the sarcastic humour.

    Update soon please!
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