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By : SickPuppy

From Visitkarte on August 14, 2008
This story sounds sick, but it turns to be much deeper and psychological then I expected it to be. I see Severus' logic, how he tried everything to dampen his conscience, nor really caring what happens to him but trying to help Harry. I know what he did was sick, but the alternatives were so much sicker... I feel sorry for both of them. I don't excuse Severus, but I understand his way of reasoning.
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From Jilliane on August 13, 2008
(Chapter 22)

Wow. This was an excellently written and powerful chapter. I was happy to see Harry walk off and leave Hermione and her nosiness behind. He doesn't need her nagging right now. On the other hand, knowing Harry, he'll soon be off doing something reckless.

Severus and his whole obsession thing....something about this doesn't ring right. I would like to see more of his inner dialogue, or know more of what he's thinking. And I hope he somehow manages to make Lucius pay.

Can't wait for the update. So get to it, Missy!
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From Jilliane on July 31, 2008
(Chapter 21)

I actually feel sorrier for Severus than I do Harry.

I love it that I can't tell, or guess, in fact, have absolutely no idea where you're going with this! It's so unpredictable and that's what makes it so good. The suspense, as they say, is killing me! And the ominous words at the end. "There's a storm coming...*shivers*

Please update soon!!!
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From Jilliane on July 31, 2008
(Chapter 20)

First of all, I'm glad to see you've updated! Yay!

This was an excellent chapter with an interesting twist....and a nice bit of misdirection at the beginning! At first I thought you'd killed off Harry, what with Severus thinking he was beyond all help, and was so relieved to see you didn't! (Or haven't yet...one never knows with you!)

The bits with Severus' thoughts as he wanders his dungeon prison were great. We're finally seeing what motivated him, and an expalnation for, his actions towards Harry. And yes, I too think Lucius deserves to suffer, greatly, and I hope Severus finds a way to make sure he does.

I'm not quite sure where you're going with this...or how it will turn out...but I can't wait to find out, so update! Soon! Don't make us wait so long again!

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From ANON - vivre on July 31, 2008
Snape is seriously twisted in this story!
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From Aufie on June 22, 2008
Only as far as the beginning of Part II right now, but I thought I would pause in my reading to leave a review. A fascinating and interesting work so far (though I'm not sure what that says about me!), original, characters are pleasantly in-character despite the somewhat 'unusual' situations you have placed them in and there seems to be a real plot instead of simple hedonistic violence. I don't like fics where the abused character enjoys being molested despite themselves and I'm glad to find there is none of that in this story.

I like Harry's response at the end of Part I, it reminds me of Winston's (disturbing yet realistic) reaction to his torture at the end of Orwell's '1984'. A nice touch! Well done and thank you.

. . . I think this is the longest review I have ever left for anything. :)
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From ANON - Solomon on June 22, 2008
You did warn that it was Dark and I read as far as I could go. I can wait for your next story .I read these story purely for fun
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From KaeXLi on June 17, 2008
more please i am happy that your plot bunny is so hoppity. i agree that as much as harry had not wanted sex with snape it was still consented.wrong of snape but consented. update again please your stories never dissapoint me
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From alleycat88 on June 17, 2008
Oh Jesus. You could just feel the pain when you read that chapter. You are such a brilliant writer! It was amazingly done! So....tell me Harry isn't dead!!! PLEASE!! Please update!!
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From myniephoenix on June 17, 2008
as always, you amaze me.
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From Jilliane on June 17, 2008

....with the cliffies!!!!!!!!

*whimpers*

(And WTF is with AFF cutting my review off????)
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From Jilliane on June 17, 2008
(Chapter 19)

Well, you've updated, so I guess I'm speaking to you again....

It was nice to read a chapter from Severus' POV, but it was frustratingly ...vague. All we really know is that he is indeed obssessed with Harry, but none of the why. Which, I'm sure, you intended! And, you know.....I don't believe Harry is dead. And, no matter if I find myself disappointed in the end, I can't yet believe that there isn't, somehow, some way, redemption for Severus. (and yes, I know it's bad grammar to start sentences with "and"...shut it!) AND, for the love of God, Woman, enough
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From Jilliane on June 17, 2008

NOOOOOOOOO!

but I'm still not speaking to you!

(and this is still not a review!)
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From ANON - CT on June 17, 2008

What's with your review page? It's about a mile wide!
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From ANON - CT on June 17, 2008

Well, I felt compelled to review after that nasty cliffhanger, if only to tell you that's a rotten place to stop. J is right, and you do seem to enjoy torturing your poor readers a little too much.

I like the story, even if it is dark and scary. Poor Harry, opening the door to the person he least expected to see. I didn't see that coming at all, but with you, I'm really not surprised. I don't understand Snape though. Well really, I don't understand any of it in regards to where you're going with this plot, so I guess I'll just have to hang around for the ride, huh? I'm sure you've got it all just as well thought out as the rest of your stories, so yeah, can't see where you'd really need any help, although I'm sure your other reviewer was only joking. And for cripe's sake, have some pity and update soon before J wears my ear off with how mean and cruel you are!!
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