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By : SickPuppy
  • From on June 01, 2008
    Who cares about Ron getting a little pain.

    As long as Harry is key.
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  • From on June 01, 2008
    You are one sick puppy but I love it!!!!!!!!!!!
    I am sick also, so keep up the good work.

    email with the updates at poohnation74@yahoo.com, thank you!!!!!!!
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  • From Dhalim on June 01, 2008
    I wonder if Ron has been told that his well being is up to Harry
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  • From ANON - Midnight Rain on June 01, 2008
    WHAT THE HELL????? HARRY YOU BACKSTABBER!!!!! HOW COULD YOU HE'S YOUR FRIEND!!!!!!!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!! I wanna know what happens soooooooooo bad!!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkGothic on June 01, 2008
    wow... with this this title to the chapter and the chapter itself I can picture Harry's innerself holding on desperatly before something in his eyes dies and he lets go, falling
    It's short and very moving this chapter.
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  • From Jilliane on June 01, 2008

    Wow! Not at all what I expected!! I never would have thought Harry would beg for Ron to suffer instead of himself. Although, after 9 chapters of torture it's a wonder he can even speak at all. I was quite shocked to read that! But...Severus. I want to think he's redeeming himself, is helping Harry by what he's told him, but.....with you, who knows? Having Harry beg for Ron to suffer rather than himself totally threw me for a loop, and so now I don't know what to expect! I had hoped Severus would be in some way on Harry's side, but now......grrrrr! Blast you!! And, of course, you leave it as a bit of a cliffhanger! Update!!! Immediately! I must know!!!
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  • From ANON - Midnight Rain on May 11, 2008
    Interesting story! I'm kinda confused over Sev though. Is he playing a role or is he really evil in this story? Please update soon!
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  • From Jilliane on May 11, 2008
    (Chapter 8)

    And back to Severus. I want to believe that Severus has some sort of plan brewing to help Harry, but it seems unlikely now. Although I do have to say, the line "Lucius had a lot to answer for.." intrigues me. Perhaps I'm way off track, but maybe there's some hope Severus is planning something after all?

    Update soon, please!
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  • From Jilliane on May 10, 2008
    (Chapter 7)

    Carrion crows were certainly something I never would have thought of. Very original.


    I have to say, that was the most creatively fascinatingly disturbing thing I have ever read, but I will also say that coming as it did from Lucius, it was strangely fitting. (Don't know how else to put it) This would have been much more disturbing, to me anyway, if it had been anyone other than Lucius. I think even Voldemort himself wouldn't have been so cruel, but Lucius.....he just seems capable of not only thinking or doing something like this, but enjoying it as well. You said this fic would be dark, and you weren't usuing the term lightly. The worst thing about it is poor Harry. The physical torture certainly, but also the mental torture. Of him knowing he cannot take anymore and at the same time knowing that if he doesn't, he's condeming his best friend to the same, if not worse, ordeal. The guilt he must be feeling at that alone is almost inconceivable. And like Lilith, I also wonder if it's even actually Ron who is there.

    Update soon!
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  • From alleycat88 on May 10, 2008
    Oh my. Poor harry. That was horrible. And yet I could not stop reading! Please more! I need to know if they even have Ron?! Will Harry survive!?
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  • From on May 05, 2008
    WOW, you did say it was dark.

    I still like it, I want to see Harry kill them all!!!!!!
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  • From Jilliane on May 05, 2008


    Strangely enough, the violence is a little easier to swallow coming from Lucius, I suppose because we somehow expect it from him. Having said that, although I expected cruelty, I didn't expect Sectumsempra. This was as harrowing as the first chapters. I can't imagine the sort of pain Harry must be in being flayed open, then raped again.

    And Lucius isn't done yet.

    Oh dear...
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  • From ANON - xaraxn on May 05, 2008
    wow good 5 chapters i love all of your stories so much i cant wait to see where this one is going. and i want to know that look snape had in his eyes in chapter five.do we get to find out.i know its dark fic but i cant help but hope things will get better for harry.ron...ehh you can do what you like with him.*shrugs* ron basher* anyway love your work love the refreshing vocabulary and your grammer skills i cant tell you how many fics i read where there are double negatives in every sentence so kudos to you and your amazing stories you will find no flames here.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 04, 2008
    O dear. This story is incredibly good love! MORE PLEASE!
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  • From Jilliane on May 04, 2008

    It makes me want to cry to see Severus so monstrous. "Crawl like the dog you are." I want so badly for him to be imperioused or anything other than that he's fully aware and conscious of what he's doing!

    And poor Harry, so physically broken. It made his telling Severus that he wasn't his dog all the more heartwrenching. Oh my God, the angst, the agony........


    And then you end it on a cliffie?!?!?!?!? Giving Harry to Lucius?! Malicious, vindictive, evil Lucius?! How is he going to survive that???

    Update immediately, you wretched woman!!!

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