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Reviews for Low Man Is Due

By : SickPuppy
  • From Jilliane on May 04, 2008
    (Chapter 4)

    Erm....my eyes are seared.....


    That gives harrowing an entirely new meaning. In terms of writing, that was excellent. Good writers evoke feeling and reaction in their readers, and you've certainly done that. I'm nearly speechless. This was beyond intense, and yes, very dark, but the writing of it! Astounding! You described every chilling detail of Harry's ordeal perfectly.

    It made me feel desperately sad in a way. Severus/Harry is my favourite pairing, and I hate to think of Severus as this sort of monster. I don't see any redemption for him after this, I don't see how there can be. Having said that, and however more dark and brutal and disturbing this story will be, it hasn't put me off continuing to read it. I love your writing, there's a reason besides friendship that you're listed on my AFF "Recommended Reading" list as "Anything by SickPuppy", I love your writing and I love to see you stretching your considerable writing talents with this, as it's so different to your other stories. Yes, I reviewed a lot, but I had a lot to say about this story, and yes, because I want very much to read more! I'm ensnared by this now, and desperately want to see where it goes, it's THAT good. I'm impressed to say the least, and when you told me the sketchy details, yeah, I knew it'd be good, but this! This is awesome. Dark, yes. Violent, yes. Disturbing, to say the least! But awesome all the same!

    Update soon! Please!

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  • From ANON - Sammy on May 04, 2008
    hott hott hott
    I really like dark fics like this and you pull it off extremely well! I love the way you portray snape... wow that was just really sexy! please post more id lovee to see how this plays out especially with that last line "remember you gave your consent" oooh too much ;)
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  • From alleycat88 on May 04, 2008
    ooo MORE! i need more!
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  • From Jilliane on May 03, 2008

    Read Chapter 3 again and just had to add more....Snape's last words..for Harry to remember he consented, gave me shivers! I think that was the most chilling aspect of the chapter. How awful for Harry! And Ron, if he ever finds out what Harry was forced to do to save him, even though he's already horribly injured, I'm sure he'd carry a lot of guilt. Again, I want more of this story now, but it's a little scary at the same time. This is what I love about your stories, you make me want to ask, and since we're friends, you'd probably tell me, but at the same time I don't want to know until you post!!! Arrgghh!!! The agony!

    The cliffies!

    You really are quite evil, you know!


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  • From Jilliane on May 03, 2008
    (Chapter 3)

    Oh! Snape is definitely not there to help!!!

    God...I want more of this story, but....at the same time it's chilling! This is so unlike your other stories....but an excellent display of your writing talents!

    Can't wait for the next chapter, even though it won't be pretty, I'm sure!

    I'm riveted!

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  • From Jilliane on May 03, 2008
    (Chapter 2)

    *eep!*

    Erm...ok, my erm...bad. Snape isn't to the rescue, at least not Ron's. Wow...you weren't kidding when you said it was dark. Even so.....stunning writing...the description of Ron's treatment, again...harrowing.

    I can't imagine what's in store for Harry....not sure I want to know...

    Of course I do!!! Update! You and your damned cliffies! You're making me crazy!

    And thanks for the dedication. Even though the story is dark, I won't take it personally...or as a comment on my personality...or...hmmm..........*frowns*


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  • From Jilliane on May 03, 2008

    A cliffie on the first chapter!!!!! YOU. ARE. EVIL!!!!!

    Wow.....dark indeed. This was quite chilling. Good description of Harry's wounds and the place he found himself in. Harrowing. Oh my goodness but I can't WAIT for the update!!!

    God....and it's Snape, isn't it? To the rescue as usual?

    Update SOON! You owe it for the cliffhanger!

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  • From ANON - BlackCat on May 03, 2008
    Sounds promising. Are you going to explain how Harry and Ron got captured? Please update soon.
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