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Reviews for To Enchant a King

By : LadyVoldemort87
  • From Malfoysgirl on May 14, 2008
    Oh that's was such a sweet chapter! I loved it. Please add more soon
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  • From Citten on May 14, 2008
    okay so far i love the story and i really cant wait until the next chapter you are helping me feel better. (my purse and camera-with pitures were stolen out of my car on sunday while at church.:( ) well anyways you are making things a little easier. so i do hope that you will be posting soon-like really soon! :) i love that you made sirious hermione's brother! well this story really makes me not like narrcissa-though i really did not like her before, so no loss there. i also really love that lucius is and was able to spot and drawn to hermione so i could deal with this story being really, really long. :)
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on May 11, 2008
    I have to say AU fics aren't really my thing but I am interested to see where this one goes...but the question is...when are Lucius and Hermione going to fuck? I reckon that's what everyone wants to know!...LOL

    Great work keep it up!....like an erection....ROFLMBFAO!
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  • From angelnomiko on May 09, 2008
    wow that was awsome .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From chickaboo on May 09, 2008
    Abso-freaking-lutely amazing! Ahh I'm so in love with this story! I can't wait for more....
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily on May 09, 2008
    Gah! So much in this chapter and yet not nearly enough! I was just getting into it again and it ended. Devestation is the only way I can describe my reaction when I reached the end. I'm already itching for more lol.

    Anyway I'm really excited about Lucius's reaction to Hermione and vice versa. Things are certainly heating up there, I can't wait for Narcissa's reaction to it all. As I said before I'm still really curious about Lucius's marriage but I can happily wait for later chapters. I'm just hoping for more interaction between Hermione and Lucius and getting to know them as these characters a bit better and then you mentioned magic coming into play and just... ah! So much to it all

    You've got my attention, more soon... please! lol
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  • From on May 08, 2008
    Chapter 2 and I still love this story. And how often do I review stories? Almost never
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  • From catysmom1028 on May 08, 2008
    Moooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeee. I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on May 08, 2008
    Awesome update. Please add more soon
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily on May 06, 2008
    Wow! I am hooked already and its only the first chapter. I really enjoyed this.

    Narcissa and Sirius being Hermione's siblings also looks like it'll have interesting possibilites. I am curious though about Narcissa having been sent to get the King. Curious as to the wheres and whys of that one. Also the King being married has me wondering and a bit concerned for Hermione. It'd be interesting to see how she does as only his mistress and as the story progresses would that change [at the minute I'd hope so lol]

    Either way I'm really enjoying this and I really hope to see more appear soon!


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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on May 06, 2008
    Keep going Doll, you know you can count on me to keep reading. =)


    XXX
    SG
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  • From Tenar10r on May 06, 2008
    Great Start!

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  • From bzbabe on May 05, 2008
    This is really, really good so far. It reminds me of The Other Boleyn Girl. I can't wait for you to update soon. :)
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  • From heather360 on May 05, 2008
    I love it when HP characters are placed outside of JK'S world! Fantastic job! xoxo
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  • From on May 05, 2008
    I really love this story; it's very unique and refresh, not all "Lucius has me prisioner and were eventually going to fall in love"; which is finem I've read so many (and, guiltily admit, written a few).

    One small mistake: Narcissa addresses Lucius as "Your Grace". This is how you address a duke, not a king
    Just thought you otta know
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