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Reviews for To Enchant a King

By : LadyVoldemort87
  • From on May 05, 2008
    hmm. I do like this! although I am curious to where you will go with this. You appear to be taken inspiration from Henry VIII and Anne Boyelyn, but will you actually kill Hermione/Anne? Just curious: it won't affect whether or not I continue to read it, I'm just curious.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on May 05, 2008
    I like it. It's an interesting twist. Will they have magic at all or doing a combination of the Harry Potter universe with the Other Boelyn Girl? True, Lucius is arrogant enough to act like Henry VIII but the conbination could be a tricky on to work out. I wish you luck with it if that is the case. I look foward to reading more soon.
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  • From ANON - Pallas on May 05, 2008
    It's nice to see how you turned this fascinating piece of history in a story. However, you could have made it more interesting or more true to the HP series if it had been a magical court... I feel like you have missed a great opportunity there; an opportunity to let your readers see how creative you could have been, mixing history with the HP universe and turning it into a whole new, titillating story... Now it's not much more than changing a few names here and there and giving the story a predictable storyline and a happy ending for the couple (instead of a beheading/exile).

    I hope I'll be proven wrong as the story continues... I have good hopes that it will be more creative than the first chapter!

    Pallas


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  • From calmchick on May 05, 2008
    Great plot, I was thinking about the Tudors/other Boelyn girl when I was reading it. Good job, please continue!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on May 04, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From chickaboo on May 04, 2008
    This is freaking awesome! I can't wait for more!!
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