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By : LadyVoldemort87

From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2009
your doing this very well however i would have cast it as
narcisa - Kathrine
Hermoine - Anne
Ginny - Mary
Ron - George
Harry - as either mary's first or second husband
and then tweeked it so that Anne had a happy ending
but thats just my opinion
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From LaBibliographe on December 23, 2008
Chapter 13: It
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From LaBibliographe on December 23, 2008
Chapter 12: Finally the lovers are able to consummate their attraction. Their lovemaking was deliciously written. So those two have come to a safe harbor while Draco sails into danger. What was he thinking to sleep around. I see he got payback quite quickly. It
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From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2008
SQUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I didn't realise you'd done epilogues!!!!! I loved them all. How wonderful of you to give everyone their happy ending and reunite lost loves and let them all grow old together. LMAO on Lucius already planning for number 8. Alright for him to say, he's not the one pushing the little bundle of joy out!!!

All together now - awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! :)
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From Scarybearhair on December 18, 2008
Ignore my first review hon. LOL!
I had only read Epilogue 16, not paying attention, and I though, gosh, she ended that quickly. LOL
Now I have read all four, which is much better! :D

This was lovely my dear. You wrapped everything up beautifully. I am glad to see that Riddle has turned over a new leaf. Narcissa served her sentence and has been released. The Snapes are happy, as well as the Duke and Duchess of Suffolk And of course it
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From Citten on December 17, 2008
I LOVED IT!!!! ESPICALLY THE END!!! a twilight fan i see as well! :) me too!!! i totally love the plotting of have the eighth child i really loved the idea of twilve! :) i will be watching for the next story!
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From chickaboo on December 17, 2008
What a wonderful story! Thank you so much for sharing it! I have enjoyed every second reading it. I hope you write another story soon, I love your work.
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From LadyBlueEyes on December 17, 2008
So sweet, Hermione and Lucius definitely overcame a lot to be together!!!

I've loved every moment of this story!!

Brilliant work, lovebug!!

Love and hugs
Lady B*
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From LadyBlueEyes on December 17, 2008
~*V*~

OMG I HEART YOU!!!!!

Draco
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From soldiersgirl0709 on December 17, 2008
My goodness! You were a busy little beaver last night werent you? Did you ever go to bed like I told you to? I love it my sweet girl! Love it love it and love you!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful work, I am so proud of you.

Lots of Love,
S_G
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From anniea on October 26, 2008
wow update soon *kisses*
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From LadyWinterhartZC on September 28, 2008
I hate to say it....but I kinda feel bad for Narcissa.... Maybe...(oh, i'm going to regret saying this)..maybe it could be a shortened sentence as a gift to Hermione? Or maybe on the day of his child's birth? As a kind of "hey world, I'm so happy I have a child that I'm going to let his aunt out of prision early so that she can be with her kid" thing? I don't know, I'm just babbling. Seriously though, that must really hurt, to be separated from your child immediately at his birth.

But Yay! to Lucius and Hermione getting married and getting their smut on! Very nice job there.
I can't wait to read more, so please keep writing. Thanks.
WZC.
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From mignonette on September 27, 2008
Wow! I really love this story! I love the Tudor dynasty & Lucius Malfoy. Put them together,,, bliss! Please keep writing!
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From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2008
Just to be the 100th reviewer (LOL) I do have to add that I loved the picture. Lucius did look rather hot. ;)
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From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2008
What a mixed review this will be...In part one I was in absolute tears. Why is it one always realises almost too late who they truly love. Poor Narcissa. I know she deserved her punishment but I felt so sorry for her and to have her child taken from her, well at the rate I'm going through tissues I'm going to have to get a crate load in. On the plus side it's a great excuse to eat more chocolate - LOL - (like I need one) I'm kind of hoping they get their reunion after the ten years though, (you've turned me into a soppy romantic, goshdarnit). And for the second part, whew! In the first place I want to order one of those pert, scrumptious bottoms for myself. LOL And then the King can rock on over to my place and give me a bit of that royal treatment. (waves hand in front of her face). Now that was HOT! And I loved some of the phrases you used to describe their actions and body parts, tastefully naughty. WELL DONE!!
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