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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts: The Temple

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From LaBibliographe on May 06, 2008
    Chapter 1: Ah, an adventure to be savored in three parts. Excellent. Is the temple site in England or Wales or
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  • From ANON - angeleye68 on May 06, 2008
    Yeah, all hail Snape Goddess!! I have just read all 7 chapters and absolutely love this little adventure so far and two more adventure stories that will last all summer long -- I am very happy!

    You have an incredible writing style and each chapter flows so smoothly into the next. And of course, you are writing about my favorite - Lucius. What is not to love about this man.. And yes, I like this Hermione, I think she is going to give Lucius a run for his money (so to speak). I also like the fact that Severus and Draco have already popped up in this story... There is just something about these 3 Slytherins that is too irresistible.

    Lastly, I have a question for you -- about the whole thinking about sex thing for a man (the calculation) Did you by any chance get this from a movie (Simply Irresistible)? There is something similiar in the movie and I laughed when I saw the movie and then again when you had written something similiar.
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  • From ANON - Nelly on May 06, 2008
    Wooo! Yes! Simply love where your going with this and the way you get there. Excellent plot idea, very novel, and I love your portrayal of Hermione... and Lucius. I'm also ridiculously giddy to find you update so frequently. Thank you for putting a smile on my face with your chapters, I had a truly awful day.
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  • From ANON - Niclaire on May 06, 2008
    Argh! Leaving it this way was truly devious of, you know? But I love your HG/LM fics, and this one seems to be even better than the others. And I must say that such a liberated version of Hermione appeals to me in a strange way. With great appreciation, and praying for a quick update - Niclaire.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on May 06, 2008
    OMG SG! This is your best work yet. Truly feel sorry for Lucius at this moment, Hermione is giving him a run for his money. Awesome in everyway. Please add more soon
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  • From HarryPotterFan on May 06, 2008
    I'm so glad you have another story up. I've read all of your other stories and they are all really great. This story is turning out to be really good (not that that's a surprise coming from you). Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on May 06, 2008
    LOL hermione is a tad cruel leaving ol' sev hanging like that hehe.

    I love the conversations between these two, witty banter is always the best!

    So morgana has set the scene for sex...hmmmm *crosses fingers for outrageous sexual escapdes* LOL

    This is such a great story!
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  • From luvlivsmile on May 06, 2008
    Awesome! I love the hints of Indiana Jones !!!!! I really like what you are doing with Lucius too

    Great Story
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  • From ANON - mariteri on May 06, 2008
    You're back! I was starting to go through withdrawl. LOL! This story is great so far and I look forward to reading more soon. I'm tempted just to ask you to e-mail it to me, but I wouldn't have anything to look forward to reading. So update as quickly as you can, please?
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  • From luvlivsmile on May 06, 2008
    You have no clue what great timing this is! My boyfriend just broke up with me because he is moving across the country and "can't handle long distance relationships". I'm so glad to have something to take my mind off of it all. PLUS!! I am an anthropology major so this should be a fun read. THANK YOU!!!!
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  • From Utopia on May 06, 2008
    I love how you described how Lucius is learning touch, texture and taste again. You don't know what you've got 'til its gone - and he learnt the hard way.

    I like how she isn't shy. God, I quite simply ADORE this take on Herms!

    Why'd she wear the kinky knickers and fancy bra as an archaeologist? Surely a sports bra and boy shorts would be more practical?? Or was she secretly hoping for something?

    manhood... *smirk*

    Gotta love the breast thing! lol!

    Lucius thinks that doing a scientific study on penile handling is wierd? Blimey, compared to some studies that's dead boring! Someone compared penis and testicle size (in primates of all description) with fecundity (and I don't want to know how they got close enough to measure them on the bigger primates - such as the gorilla... and then someone did a study looking at the time or orgasm and pregnancy rates! lol.

    Poor Lucius, lad needs a good wank and then he'll be ok... ish.

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  • From KellyJCR on May 06, 2008
    Wow pleased to see that you are back so soon. I love your new story (as if you didn't know). That part about penile handling had me in a fit of giggles. I once had a co-worker that would adjust himself as often as one would blink. Drove all the women in the office insane because he was oblivious to it all ( I think is quite crass myself, my husband and I have had many a conversation on how to be a little more discreet.). Anyway I digress, as usual welldone story thus far and keep up the great writing.
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  • From Utopia on May 06, 2008
    You have NO idea about how happy I am to see this! If I have to go over Mendel and his fecking peas again I'm going to scream!

    Have the pair of them forgotten they can duel magically, or do you (our esteemed author) just want them rolling in the dust?? *raises eyebrow in a suggestive manor*

    Actually, me and Andy had a little disagreement yesterday, and THAT ended with me biting his bare bum too! *quite scared now that S_G appears to be like a BigBrother kinda being*

    But female moods are soooooooooooooooooooo interesting! Unless you're male, then they're an enigma.

    Morganna is like the odd captain bloke of Futurama (the one with the green dude who fancies the lass with one eye) - she's bleeding obsessed with red velvet! Though I'll have the nightie, I have quite a collection of silky neglegees that make me feel dead sexy and gorgeous.

    Hermione seems unable to put 2 and 2 together... though my human evolution lecturers would argue that as a plus point. Archaeologists look at an artifact from the Neanderthals and jump to conclusions that don't have a scrap of evidence. Biology and archeology don't get on well when looking at that time frame.

    he he! I can see this witch's spirit getting huffy with swapping the bed size back and forth! lol! I can imagine a tapping foot and a cry of 'make your bloody minds up and f**k like bunnies already!' Rather Monty Python, if you ask me...

    Wooooo! I never claimed to be a lady either! lol!

    Can't listen and eat at the same time! lol! The way to a man's heart (if you are unable to perform a Y-cut and remove the rib cage) is through his stomach!

    Awwww... Morganna doesn't like slash. Bugger. (pun intended).

    Glad to see you also like Angela! I can't get enough of her! Have you read Mercenaries and the new Warlord! *phwor* Andy didn't know what hit him after I read those! *blushes*

    Keep it coming, darlin', keep it coming!


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  • From Shalengreh on May 06, 2008
    Cool!
    MORE MORE MORE MORE
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  • From eileenmilner on May 06, 2008
    Another yummy story. It's brilliant, your imagination is just incredible
    Look forward to the next instalment. Best wishes,with the hope everythings
    ok at home.
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