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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts: The Temple

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Shetan on May 06, 2008
    I adore this story of Lucius and Hermione, please update soon.
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  • From Tenar10r on May 06, 2008
    WOOO! Excellent!
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  • From ANON - Steph on May 05, 2008
    Yay! New story!
    I've been checking here every day for this story to be uploaded, and its finally here! Woo!
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  • From Terrie on May 05, 2008
    Adventure! Romance! Lucius! What more could a woman ask for! It's a wonderful read and I'm sure the rest will be too. I'm bouncing up and down, on pins & needles and doing the happy dance. LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2008
    my fave writer is back with my fave couple too, i just love you and your brillaint mind.
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 05, 2008
    Dear Snape_Goddess:
    Reviews to follow, but can you reduce the length of your final line at the bottom of the first chapter? It looks like this (~@*~*@*~*@*~*@*~*@).

    When an author types a long decorative line, the rest of the written words cannot be any shorter, because the computer sees the decorative line as one loooonnnnng word. If you can shorten the line, then the rest of your chapter will be able to wrap around allowing easier reading for your fans.

    Gratefully,
    LaBib (who made the same mistake and got help from the AFF admin)
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  • From Gertie on May 05, 2008
    Just when I think I know what to expect from you, you suprise me with something as unique and wonderful as this! I can't wait to see what happens. As always, you rock my socks off.
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  • From heather360 on May 05, 2008
    I love this story! It is like Tomb Raider meets Harry Potter! *SIGH* I LOVE YOUR BRAIN. xoxo
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 05, 2008
    wow, this is fantastic. i was wondering when you were going to post a new story. Hermione reminds me of Lara Croft from the Tomb Raider games and movies. And Lucius seems to be a reluctant Indiana Jones. I love it...i can't wait until the next chapter to find out what the sacrifices are.... oh and i'd give almost anything to be able to see Draco's face when he saw Snape and Hermione shagging! That would have been funny!
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  • From ANON - little, old me on May 05, 2008
    I just want to say, and that with great admiration for your abilities and great respect for your life outside this realm called fanfiction, I NEED MORE!
    your story is fascinating and I can't wait to see what will happen in the temple...
    so pleasepleaseplease update if you find the time!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on May 05, 2008
    OMG SG!!! This story is bloody amazing! i love love love Lucius in this brilliant tale! hehe and i loved how Draco caught Hermione and snape shagging LMAO cant wait for more chapters!!! xx
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  • From Utopia on May 05, 2008
    But satisfaction brought it back

    I think I could cope with just sex from Snape... yeah, sounds nice actually.

    Oooooh.... sacrifices and a cliffie! wow! I'm hooked!

    Ps. How's hubby? When's he home?

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  • From Utopia on May 05, 2008
    Narcissa should have gone to specsavers.

    Why would the house elves be drinking? Driven to despair because they didn't have enough work to do? *that sounded wierd*

    I have to say, your Hermione is a VAST improvement on the original! Shagging Snape, watching Draco watch them and listening to Snape tell her to invite him... *STANDING OVATION*

    Tell you what, I'll build up Draco's stamina while Hermione has her way with Lucius... then I'll do her a swap!
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  • From Utopia on May 05, 2008
    Was Lucius shagging the insane witches of Azkaban, or did they jump him?? lol
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  • From Utopia on May 05, 2008
    Perverted seems to be a must have on the Azkaban guard CV.

    I really LOVE how you've darkened Hermione's hair and lengthened it. If it's plaited and hangs to her hips, then free of the style it must be past her bum! The weight would probably pull the curls into more manageable waves.

    Is Herms a practicing dominatrix?? lol. Those guards were terrified of her! lol"

    He may have been an elitist prick who had tried on more than one occasion to kill her and her friends, but he had looked damn fine while doing it. AGREED! *swoons*


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